Monthly Archives: April 2008

WRITING: Woe is me.

Maybe it’s the familiarity after fifty readings.  Maybe it’s the deadlines–self-imposed, but surely there.  No submissions ready before the summer cutoffs, nothing new with punch.  I smack of novice; creative writing course form and story.  Only BoB was worth the … Continue reading Continue reading

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STORIES: Musical Background

Who knows what lyrics linger in the mind to reincarnate as story? Dolly, Linda, & EmmyLou: Lovers_Return.m4a Continue reading

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WRITING: First Person POV and Grammar

Very good post at Conversational Reading wherein Scott tackles the fine points of unreliable first person narrator and focuses on the grammatical skill of the teller of story.  I’ve come up against this many times in my own writing–both questions: … Continue reading Continue reading

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STORIES: Walking Away – Draft #4

Between sessions at the Writers Festival yesterday and some creative time this morning I’ve reworked this story and looked again at the new one before I moved onto the Storyspace piece, The Hanging.  I’ve been away from it for quite … Continue reading Continue reading

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STORIES: M.A.A.A.S.C.

She was excited, even in the limousine, even as they entered the main drag through L.A. she felt the vibrant pulse of the people of the city.  The driver slowed as they neared the hotel, stopping several times as people … Continue reading Continue reading

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WRITING: A Personal Dividing Line in Fact and Fiction

We’ve talked about this in class, and it’s one of those things that are never clearly answered–unless you’re James Frey and have never been a dope addict. Lisa at Eudaemonia has an excellent post today on how much of ourselves … Continue reading Continue reading

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LITERATURE: Up Next: If on a winter’s night a traveler

I’d read Chapter 1 of this about a month ago when I thought I couldn’t make it through Miller’s Topic of Cancer.  I put it aside when my stubborn nature wouldn’t let me give up on Miller. Tonight I read … Continue reading Continue reading

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STORIES: Only A Phone Call Away – Draft #2

A bit of tweaking, some fleshing out, though still no setting as suggested by my friend Carolyn, but submitted in this form for workshopping: Download Only A Phone Call Away.pdf Wondering if I somehow miss relating the transition point of … Continue reading Continue reading

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LITERATURE: Tropic of Cancer – Finale (No, really)

When I finished that last post I moved along into housework and such, wondering how I could be so flippant about a piece of work that’s considered a classic.  I do understand the notion of classics not necessarily being known … Continue reading

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LITERATURE: Tropic of Cancer – Finale

Some points of interest… Some seemingly philosophical soliloquies on the state of mankind, the government, and God. The idea of combining fact with fiction on such a personal level that the narrator is once referred to as "Henry" and why … Continue reading Continue reading

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ASSIGNMENTS: Reassigning

With an eye to the future when this weblog will be just so much undecipherable dust, I’ve reassigned the stories I’ve written herein or hereout–in Hypertextopia–to a new "STORIES" category.  Much of the false starts or in using them simply … Continue reading Continue reading

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STORIES: Only A Phone Call Away

First draft, new (started here in a couple of posts) not ready for prime time story: Only A Phone Call Away.pdf Continue reading

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WRITING: F/S Person POV (Continued)

A tiny overlap and continued narrative: You light a cigarette and drag the phone cord through the kitchen, out the door, into the garage because your wedding vows included never smoking in the house. But you won’t tell Brad that … Continue reading Continue reading

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WRITING: First/Second Person POV

So here you are, close to ten years married,  and the phone rings and you don’t recognize the caller ID phone number which makes you curious so you pick it up and say hello and a sexy baritone from deep … Continue reading Continue reading

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LITERATURE: Tropic of Cancer – Some Indication of Character

Miller’s character has been one filled with low regard for women–notwithstanding the obvious explanation that he is hanging out with whores.  But there is a subtle empathy here: When I listen to the reproaches that are leveled against a girl … Continue reading Continue reading

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