WRITING: The Charm of Commenting

Loved this article by Kirsty Logan at the Pank Magazine Blog on her experience with joining the Fictionaut group:

Some of it is genius, some of it is crap, and some of it is probably amazing if I could only understand it. I read Fictionaut more avidly than I read any other magazines or websites, and I feel more connected to it; maybe because I feel like I know these writers.

It’s a lonely calling, this writing business, and it’s ego-bruising more often than it sets you flying, but the support of other writers is something that keeps one going sometimes. Kirsty says it well:

Because that’s what I love best about all this social media – the blogs, the status updates, the trackbacks. I love when people comment on one another’s words. I love dialogue. I love that people are responding to the thoughts of others.

On top of this, I found two messages today in response to my own commenting on there:

“Thanks for your comments on my story. I always look for your picture in the comments column, and if I don’t see it in a day or two, I delete the story!”

and

“Susan, your comment makes writing the story so worth it!”

That for me, as a fellow writer, is one of the best comments I could get back.

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CURRENT AFFAIRS: Twisting Words

On the Supreme Court’s discussion of the extension of federal rulings to cover states and local government:

“Justice Stephen Breyer was most vigorous in asserting that the Second Amendment involves dangerous weapons and should not be accorded the same status as other constitutional rights. “We’re starting with a difference in purposes,” he said, suggesting that the right to weapons cannot be equated with the right to free speech, for example.”

Just ask any victim of emotional and verbal abuse about that, sir. Some people would prefer one quick shot to a lifetime of demoralizing and debilitating commentary. Probably a similar number of deaths by suicide and by aggression towards and poor interaction with others result from this.

Arms can and should be controlled in a likewise manner as is freedom of speech.

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WRITING: The Inside Workings of Community

Good article at Outsider Writers on the purposes and personal needs and uses of communities founded around a common interest: What is A Writing Community, Anyway?

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WRITING & LITERATURE & BLOGGING: A Tiger’s Worth of Excuses

Yes, I’m STILL reading Confessions of Nat Turner and will post on it soon, but it’s obvious that I haven’t been the twice-a-day poster girl here for a while. Well, there are some good reasons for that. I’m writing. And, I’m getting quite a few stories published.

So in this age of me-me-me, I’m focusing on my own writing more than reading someone else’s–though I am reading about fifteen stories a day on the writers colony site fictionaut. There’s a sense of enthusiasm and support from the writers gathered here that I’ve not found elsewhere at this high a level of quality writing. These people aren’t wannabes, they’re for the most part, published authors and editors so they have that burning fire and unrelenting drive that makes writing a big part of their lives.

In the past few months, I’ve realized my own ambitions of being published or forthcoming in literary journals such as The Blue Print Review, elimae, Bewildering Stories, The New River Journal, fourpaperletters, metazen, Litsnack, Istanbul Literary Review, and others. A Valentine’s Day Challenge turned into a group of 25 stories and poems that will be published in chapbook form and I’m glad to say that my story is included. But it’s taken me a long time to get to this point and I can’t sit and rest on my laurels. What pleases me very much is that a couple of the stories were written in hypertext and that I’m finding publishers willing to work with me on this and include it in their journals.

So that’s where I’ve been and that’s where I’ll be for a while, particularly now with many of the submission deadlines closing before the summer. I’ve got a whole batch of new stories that need endings, and a long way to go before I can rest, but Spinning and its sister Hypercompendia are not dead, just holding their breath while I play on the railroad tracks.

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STORIES: Lust

I wrote this one a while ago, as part of a series on the 7 Deadly Sins. I read it at the Wesleyan Writers Conference back in ’05 during a student reading program but it was waiting for just the right voice, physical voice, and I found that in Finnegan Flawnt.

Click to listen to:  Lust

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WRITING: A Valentine’s Day Gift of Love

Fictionaut’s a great colony of writers and between yesterday and (ongoing) today, there are at least 20 hastily written great Valentine’s Day stories by writers that rose to the fun challenge. This group is just one of overwhelmingly good writers, well-represented in the literary journals, and best of all, the most supportive and helpful bunch of artists I’ve ever encountered.

Here’s my contribution to the challenge: A Gift of Love

But do read them all, the poetry and flash fiction would make a great anthology!

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WRITING: Flash Fiction

I use twitter as the person next to me that’s available for a passing thought but isn’t there right now. I just tweeted: “Uh-oh. I’m beginning to be irked by “moments” that want to pass for flash fiction story.”

Flash fiction is usually at maximum 1000 words, usually less than 500. I’ve just started getting into it and was happy to see that my writing could compress into that form without losing story. I love the concise quick kill, the clean stage with a few obvious props of painted trees and a bench that signifies a park. It is a form that goes for the jugular, and it reaches it first try. It’s a heart-thumping, gut-wrenching, jaw-dropping scene that envelopes a lifetime in a moment. But it doesn’t always work just for its lack of verbiage.

In amongst the jewels I’m finding a lot of cut glass. The writing is superb, but frankly, the story isn’t there at all. While leaving much to the imagination of the reader is fine, leaving the reader to write the whole story is (Barthes be damned) presumptive and ridiculous if one still wants to use the self-designation of story writer.

A moment captured properly can indeed be the representation of a life story. Then again, it could just be an interesting moment and not a story at all. After all, I can look at you and say, “Hey!” and where’s the story in that? But if forced to make something of it because that’s all that’s been presented, you will. Am I angry at you? Did you do something wrong? Do I need help with something? Do I have a knife hidden somewhere?

More on this later. I like to keep it brief–but informative. 😉

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WRITING: The Literary Journal of the 2-Year College

This is an interesting article by New Pages on the importance of the 2-Year College Literary Magazine (thanks to Dorothee of Blue Print Review for pointing this out).

There are as many reasons to publish a topical magazine as there are reasons to write. For some larger institutions, it may bring in some bucks–though nowhere close to what a good ball team can bring in. Then again, editors aren’t paid college coach salaries either. Then again, the article doesn’t overlook the small college as a source worth scouting:

“Maybe it’s time we started paying attention to what’s going on outside of the literary bubble, so we can see some of the raw talent of writers who aren’t afraid to experiment.”

There is the real and honest effort to showcase literature and the arts as a path of cultural and intellectual excellence. There is a purpose to simply encourage students by showcasing their work and firing an interest that may have lain dormant or repressed. And sometimes, it’s used as a handout to impress alumni and others in hopes of donations.

“Community college students are non-traditional – so you have this whole crop of writers from incredibly diverse backgrounds,” says John Dermot Woods, faculty advisor for Luna, the student-run literary magazine published at Nassau Community College in New York. “The possibility of finding something there, something raw, something that isn’t out of a polished school of literature or thinking, is a really wonderful thing.”

I went to a small community college, Tunxis in Farmington, CT, and encouraged by a faculty member, planned, edited, and physcially published a small, hot off the xerox, literary magazine called “otto” that was eventually brought to the board and given some funding to allow production of a slick, color-photo magazine published annually. Community colleges are not luckily taken up by the strict focus on sports and are more open to all aspects of learning, English and grammar being an important element of that learning.

And some grow to become a very important element of the college:

“We weren’t content to be a small literary journal and just publish our students,” says Bart Edelman, the editor of Eclipse, a Glendale College literary magazine that went national in 2000. Eclipse reserves about 15-20% of the magazine for student work. “I thought it was really important to do something greater and to allow our students to have that unusual opportunity to be part of a national literary landscape. We wanted to see if we could have the best of both worlds.”

The article goes on to note that small college publications face the same problems of other publishing houses and large university presses, looking for a readership supportive enough to justify the expenses when cost-cutting comes around.  It’s an excellent read and I’m happy that New Pages and writer Jessica Powers took the time to delve into this.

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WRITING: Literary Journals

I was directed to this by a fictionaut tweet, “The Death of Literary Fiction” at Mother Jones. It does give an historical account of university MFA Creative Writing programs and the decade by decade changes in the reading and subsequent funding of the college literary journals.

“Last summer, Louis Menand tabulated that there were 822 creative writing programs. Consider this for a moment: If those programs admit even 5 to 10 new students per year, then they will cumulatively produce some 60,000 new writers in the coming decade. Yet the average literary magazine now prints fewer than 1,500 copies. In short, no one is reading all this newly produced literature—not even the writers themselves. And with that in mind, writers have become less and less interested in reaching out to readers—and less and less encouraged by their teachers to try.”

By some theories, there will be a rise and decline in any trend so that while the online publishing formats may have put a dent in the hard copy journals–and produced some very interesting changes–there is also the move towards reading in short form and online with laptops, notebooks, netbooks and of course, Kindle, etc. versus the fact that many paper journals have hopped onto the web wagon for narrative display.

Another thing I found interesting is the move on the part of magazines such as Good Housekeeping, Cosmopolitan, Redbook that I remember grabbing every month and reading the stories first, have banished fiction for the most part from their pages. Unfortunately, this didn’t seem to help the university publications:

“But the less commercially viable fiction became, the less it seemed to concern itself with its audience, which in turn made it less commercial, until, like a dying star, it seems on the verge of implosion. Indeed, most American writers seem to have forgotten how to write about big issues—as if giving two shits about the world has gotten crushed under the boot sole of postmodernism.”

As a suggestion, the article would like to see literary journals take on hardcore stories with more than navel-gazing as subject matter:

“I’m saying that writers need to venture out from under the protective wing of academia, to put themselves and their work on the line. Stop being so damned dainty and polite. Treat writing like your lifeblood instead of your livelihood. And for Christ’s sake, write something we might want to read.”

I would tend to agree to a point. While we as writers could certainly help society by focusing on some of the current events–and do so in a literary manner that focuses more than journalism could on the human aspect of these events–there still should be a place for interest in answering so many of our own personal and much less distant and earth-shattering parts of living in today’s world.

What the article did not touch upon was something that in my own ten years of beating on editorial doors I’ve seen far too much of–the tendency to “name-drop” by the lit journals as a sales tool, thus keeping out many terrific writers who don’t have that MFA or list of publishing credits to their name.

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LITERATURE: The Confessions of Nat Turner – Some Initial Thoughts

The reading here is much more welcoming in that the language is beautifully wrought. There is some question in my mind–knowing that this book is considered historical fiction based upon the actual written confessions of Mr. Turner, as to that language. Whether it be as author William Styron suggests or whether I should resort to looking up the confessions and see if the language is what Mr. Turner would use. While risking (again) being labeled a racist here, it would seem obvious that the language Styron uses in the voice of Nat Turner seems extremely formal for a Negro of that period, it is also fact that since he was self-educated and a voracious reader of the Bible, that he might indeed be a man of eloquence as even the most common of men of that period likely speak in a much more formal and correct manner than many of today’s society.

There is something that surprises me even more in this novel, and that is the intimation that Nat Turner was not driven to rebellion by the oppression of slavery as much as seeing it as a divine command by God.

“Near the end of my trapline there was a little knoll, surrounded on three sides by a thicket of scrub oak trees, and here I would make my breakfast. From this knoll (though hardly taller than a small tree, it was the highest point of land for miles) I could obtain a clear and secret view of the countryside, including several of the farmhouses which it had already become my purpose eventually to invade and pillage.

(…) For at such times it seemed that the spirit of God hovered very close to me, advising me in this fashion: Son of man, prophesy, and say, Thus saith the Lord: Say, a sword, a sword is sharpened, and also furbished: it is sharpened to make a sore slaughter.”

This sort of changes the reading for me. For while I was completely prepared for the concept of an uprising in the name of justice I can’t help being influenced by the not quite as comprehensible fanaticism that claims bloodshed in the name of religion a.k.a. terrorism today.

History has indeed proven that so many lives and civilizations have been devastated in the mistaken belief that it is being done in accordance with God’s will. I would more closely be in agreement with war for the sake of obvious repression and injustice, then in the claim of misunderstood Biblical references.

(ADDENDUM: Oddly enough, within an hour after posting this I read this report on Democratic Senator Reid’s comments regarding President Obama during the presidential campaign. It’s just so hard to be honestly interested and yet pc these days.)

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REALITY?: Frugality

I am nothing if not frugal–not cheap, frugal. It is a learned concept from generations of homeowners who worked hard and did without to be able to afford the things that were important to them.

This then, is a new trick I’ve just learned that I wish I’d tried years ago. I buy six to ten geraniums every spring to plant in pots around the outside as the main flowering plant along with whatever strikes me at the time. Usually I’ll add petunias and then something new and strange that promise a summer of delight. My father-in-law had an enormous geranium plant in his front kitchen window for years until he couldn’t really care about it anymore. This past autumn, I took one of the plants inside to try my luck rather than let it die of frost as I’ve always done.

It makes me doubly happy. To have its cheerful color against the snow outside the windows. And to know I’ve saved by not needing to buy a new one come the spring.

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STORIES: Wind

The wind whistles steadily past like a train. Past the garage where I sit in the dark with a cold cup of yesterday’s coffee, smoking a cigarette  I thought I’d given up. I look out at the back yard, brushed with snow and painted by moonlight. There’s a dark patch of pachysandra that grows by the thin line of trees that separates our yard from the neighbors. I’d planted sprigs there a decade ago and it’s happily spread itself into a crowd. A deer weaves between the spaces of bright snow and dark night, nose into the wind, and I wonder if I should follow.

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REALITY?: The Power of Positive Thinking Myth Busted

Boy, I just love it when after years of my being considered a weirdo, someone with some credentials comes out and confirms what I’ve been saying all along. From the New York Times article, “Seeking a Cure for Optimism“:

““Whereas positive mood seems to promote creativity, flexibility, cooperation and reliance on mental shortcuts, negative moods trigger more attentive, careful thinking, paying greater attention to the external world,” Joseph P. Forgas, a professor of social psychology at the University of New South Wales in Australia, wrote in the study.”

I’m not saying that the reverse is at all helpful either, but I think that for some people, anticipating a real possibility of failure is much more helpful in the long run than figuring people are going to shower you with jobs/money/love/etc. simply because you walk around expecting it. Though I’ve seen it happen; people succumbing to the greater will of someone with a bigger ego and more self-confidence that overwhelms their followers’ common sense. But we’re talking people who need to be told how to think.

“As for Ms. Ehrenreich, she believes that negative thinking is just as delusional as unquestioned positive thinking. She hopes to see a day when corporate employees “walk out when the motivational speakers start talking,” she said. “It’s all about control and money.” Her goal? To encourage realism, “trying to see the world not colored by our wishes or fears, but by reality.”

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WRITING: The Charm and Challenge of the Under-500-Word Story

One of the exercises in Creative Writing as I remember it was to write a story, cut it down to 600 words, then again in half to 300. 

I sputtered and sulked. A writer has barely set the stage, just touched on the characters, hinted at conflicts within that limited space, I argued. Shall we not let the reader see the newly ironed crisp curtains blow in the breeze of the open window that lets in the scent of the lilacs?

The answer is, of course, no. Not unless the lilac bush is holding a gun or its branches are spotted with bloodstains or it can sing Ave Maria backwards in perfect pitch.

I’m finding my stride with the under 500-word story. It can hold a lifetime because a lifetime is merely a repetition of moments sometimes shattered by change. Whatever those moments, there is either expected or unexpected reaction and that, my friends, is all there is to a story.

Then again, sometimes there is reason for more; and anyplace from the six-word-story of Hemingway to the giant 1000 pages of some great historical tome makes a story. It all depends on the time, the tone, the writer, the reader, the medium, and the next thing waiting to be written or read.

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