LITERATURE: The Pearl Metaphor

Perhaps I have found some reason, some justification for my thoughts on the moral of this fable:

Everything that loved water came to these few shallow places.  The cats took their prey there, and strewed feathers and lapped water through their bloody teeth.  The little pools were places of life because of the water, and places of killing because of the water, too.  (p. 104)

How different really is the water from the wondrous pearl?  Needed for survival, it is a blessed thing, yet draws by instinct those that would take advantage of the opportunity to steal the blessing and even the very life of those who use it.  Because they seek survival as well and have not the morals or the intellect to hunt hard within the brush.

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STORIES: What We Wear

There once was a woman who underneath her clothes was always naked.  From when she was a little girl, she grew into and out of pants and skirts and shirts and dresses that never really fit.  To all she did appear quite proper and composed, though only she truly knew her secret.  She tried on different people as she changed and sometimes turned to diets, grapefruit or sometimes chocolates, to make them fit…

Some were too tight and at the end of every day her head would ache from the slow and steady restricting bands of pressure.  Some were too big and loose and she would float around inside without a purpose, unnoticed, dreamlike as if a bubble in a level never held straight out.

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REALITY?: Garden Party

By invitation only, and even then a few unwanted weeds and tunneling mole crash through.  The first to turn up are the turnips, drunk already it would appear for they are staggering in the row.  A gentle rain outside today is a reminder, like a last minute phone call saying can you show up?  Last minute cleaning in between the seating, ruffling rugs of soil and filling cups with nutrients to toast the celebration of the garden.

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LITERATURE: The Pearl

I do like the book, but I’m not getting the underlying theme perhaps of wealth being evil–unless I’m misunderstanding the lesson, being of different mind.  It is human nature that can be evil.

Once again, Juana, sure that the pearl is the source (rather than her thievin’ neighbors) of the trouble, takes it and steals away into the night and tries to destroy it:

Quietly he tracked her, and his brain was red with anger.  She burst clear of the brush line and stumbled over the little boulders toward the water, and then she heard him coming and she broke into a run.  Her arm was up to throw when he leaped at her and caught her arm and wrenched the pearl from her.  He struck her in the face with his clenched fist and she fell among the boulders, and he kicked her in the side.  (p. 76)

Of course Kino is angry–through there is no excuse for his hitting and kicking her.  The doctor, the priest, someone who has entered his house to steal the pearl, the pearl buyers–all are screwing him royally, and now his wife wants to throw the pearl away.  It is human nature that is evil; the nature of those who feel for some reason that they should have what Kino has, deserve a portion of it.  Kino’s response to protect it, in my mind, cannot be called evil or greedy.  He is dirt poor and has found a pearl that will provide something better for his family.  But the pearl is blamed for what is happening to them. 

My closest friend just sold their house in MA for $695,000.  I’m enjoying helping her find a new one, looking at the MLS listings in NH where they’ll be moving–they have a lake cottage there already but want a regular home as well–listening to her tell me about what she’s seen. 

Kino and Juana need to sell that pearl and move to a place where they can be among people who understand that what they have is theirs, and who are willing to celebrate the good fortune of others instead of claiming it.

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NEW MEDIA: Mapping

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(Above from Eastgate presentation of Storyspace)

In playing around a bit in Patchwork Girl–not getting into the story yet; still intrigued by the process–I’m learning a bit more about the Storyspace format.  Storyspace is the software program that assists the writer in plot sequence and appears to be invaluable in keeping some sort of roadmap as to where the story can go as it is being planned out.

Which got me to asking the question not of Where am I going? but rather, Where have I been?Where was I?

It’s a very common phenomenon that major events are recalled up by the Where was I? question:  …when Kennedy was shot?  …when the Twin Towers were hit?  …when Grandma Nellie told Great Aunt Agnes to go pound sand?  It occurred to me that if memory changes the position of space in time, that the historical accuracy is compromised.  If I were not delayed and missed that flight, I might not be alive; but if memory does not recall the delay, did the plane crash?   Well of course it did.  Because other people were involved and collective memory supercedes that of the individual.

Tracing back through story is often just as interesting as forging new paths ahead.  Remember Marquez’s begonias in 100 Years of Solitude.

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LITERATURE: The Pearl – Moral

Steinbeck’s The Pearl is a fable, therefore a moral of some sort is a part of the deal, and one that reflects human nature in its struggle between good and evil.

The pearl that Kino, the protagonist, finds is of awesome beauty and size.  He and his wife, Juana are extremely poor and when their baby is bitten by a scorpion, even the upperclass doctor will not come to help because he knows he will not be paid.  The pearl is found on Kino’s first dive after the child has been bitten and is doing well because Juana has managed to suck out the poison.

But the problem here is that while so far in the story it would appear that the thrust of the argument is that money (the pearl) is evil, I feel that rather it brings evil in the form of the greed and envy of the others rather than in Kino, who has good and simple plans: a replacement for a lost harpoon, a rifle, a wedding for him and Juana, new clothes, and an education for their son.

So the priest shows up, the neighbors show up, the doctor shows up and though Kino is suspicious, allows the doctor to hoodwink him into "curing" the baby from the scorpion poison.  The only one who seems to be genuinely happy for them is Kino’s brother (aside, I should be so lucky).  Despite the obvious, Kino and Juana are fearful and angry and Juana even suggests that they throw away the pearl.

I realize that these are simple folk and that this is a moralistic tale, but what about the alternative:  find better and more decent friends?

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WRITING: Editing

Oh Lord, I’m just having the best time editing these stories for a friend.  We’re sending revisions back and forth by e-mail attachments and the comments are just getting funnier and funnier.  It’s starting to read like Evil Editor but with the author’s responses added in.

I’d love to print these out as they are; talk about reading between the lines!

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LITERATURE: Bowmen’s Bulletin

Well ain’t this neat; someone Googled "Bowmen’s Bulletin" and ended up here at Spinning.  Following the trail back in good hyperlink form, I came to e-bay and discovered it is being sold at auction.

Together with my friend Louis (he had a computer, I didn’t) we produced Bowmen’s Bulletin for five years (19 issues) before selling it to a man out in Pennsylvania who thought he could make big money off of it (Hah!  We always broke even and got our original investment back when we sold it.).  He put out two more issues and let it die. 

On the cover, that’s my nephew, Johnny, at about age six–he’s turning 22 in a couple months. 

It was a labor of love, but we didn’t lose any money on it and it answered a true need for the traditional archer.  It had a circulation of about 500, and the furthest copy went to Riyadh, Saudi Arabia to a young soldier stationed there with his family.

Ah, this brings back some great memories!  All the shoots we attended all over the country and the archers we met; the happy collating parties that included Jim, Gus and Chris as we walked around a table putting the pages together; the Society of Traditional Archers that we formed in conjunction with the magazine–I still have t-shirts with the emblem. 

But don’t bid on the magazine on e-bay–I have a limited number of all the issues in my basement.

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NEW MEDIA & LITERATURE: Patchwork Girl

Today’s a day for Patchwork Girl, and perhaps Afternoon – A Story; hyperfiction to wander in while grounded inside.

I’ve been in Michael Joyce’s Afternoon before, but not very far and not really inside the story.  It is hypertext in a simple form (whatever is considered simple for hypertext when one thinks about the work involved that goes far beyond story), while Shelley Jackson’s Patchwork Girl appears more complex while showing the reader the maps and indeed, a glimpse into the base of the Storyspace format.

My thanks to Mark Bernstein for setting me back on track.

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LITERATURE: Steinbeck’s The Pearl

Torn between McCarthy and Toni Morrison, I seek out John Steinbeck’s The Pearl as my next selection.  It is mainly because it’s a short novel, Steinbeck is easy reading, and with the burden of Hypertext 3.0, Patchwork Girl, and Ethics on my plate it seems like it will fit in without taking attention away from the others.

I’m also trying to slip in a story or two of my own among the copyediting I’m doing on sixteen short stories for a good friend.  While I’ve learned to read for story and technique as well as proof at the same time, I think editing mode is reestablished with the need, and I’m more likely to be objective about my own work when it is slid in there as part of the scheme. 

Perfect trio:  Reading and writing and rain.

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REALITY?: Rainy Day Saturdays

Taking a break in the shop, minimizing, maximizing short stories in Word as I proofread.  Check e-mail, check Bloglines, play Slider Tiles, and read Section P, pages 241 through 280 of A Writer’s Reference. 

The easily recognized roar of a motorcycle revving up from the stop sign just down the street.  I turn to the French doors to watch who would ride in the rain.  He flies by.  Another behind him by seconds, up on one wheel.  In the time that I turn my attention back to the book, I wonder if I did the right thing in the planting; if the downpour will wash all the embryo seeds all helter and skelter away.

No people today visit; they’d melt in the rain.  Unless they wore helmets and black leather jackets I suppose.

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LITERATURE: The Heart is a Lonely Hunter – Finale

Awesome book.  Most impressive was the writing, the character interaction, the narrative structure and the insight of Carson McCullers into her people.  Theme:  Hopelessness of dreams coming true and the feeling of isolation in seeking a soulmate. 

While I’ve since scanned some reviews, the main objections to the novel seem to be the lack of dramatic action and the unhappy ending for all the main characters.  For me, the internal longings and turmoil of each character’s personal strife and their connections with each were plenty dramatic enough.  Nor am I a fan of happy endings.  In books anyway.

There were a lot of intertwining themes that lay beneath the surface: the racial issue in a 1940’s south; the growing gap between wealthy and very poor that came with the industrial revolution; the impending war in Europe; a young girl’s growing from tomboy to her first sexual experience to the rut of salesclerk that destroys her desires for a life of music; a loving homosexual relationship; the loneliness within a crowd, and many more.  One of the biggest tragedies on display is the false belief fostered on hope that someone else cares about what one can be so passionate about.

I loved this novel and will seek out at least one of McCullers’ other works despite reading that this was the best of all.

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REALITY?: It’s Planted!

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Three kinds of tomatoes, hot and sweet peppers, yellow squash, cucumbers, turnips, lettuce, dill, radishi, basil, green beans, cilantro, leeks, dahlias, poppies and phlox.

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LITERATURE: McCullers’ The Heart… – Tie-In Technique

Amazing.  McCullers is truly amazing in some of her skills of storytelling.

We know the truth about what happened between Dr. Copeland and Jake Blount, but when next we come upon Jake after some time has passed, he is running blindly through the alleys:

Fighting blind with the dust and sun.  The sharp cut of teeth against his knuckles.  And laughing.  Christ!  And the feeling that he had let loose a wild, hard rhythm in him that wouldn’t stop.  And then looking close into the dead black face and not knowing.  Not even knowing if he had killed or not.  (p. 288)

While it is obvious to the reader–and to Jake–that the face is not that of Dr. Copeland that he sees but a young man caught in a fight at the carnival grounds, it holds relevance to his last meeting with Dr. Copeland and the condition the sickly doctor was in when Jake left him.  It picks up an underlying thread of the hopelessness of both of these two men’s focused desires.

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REALITY?: Morning Garden

I work alone to music of the birds of early morning, their chirping sharper in the dampness still clinging from the night rain.  The soil is dark with wetness, each surviving weed a telltale brighter green.  The hoe cuts through the plane of solidarity of the earth, mixing it with air to swell it with importance for its summer job to nurture.  The mist hangs on my shoulders like  a shawl extending out into the woods beyond the yards like some great light mantila.  I listen hard and hear gorillas there.

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