LITERATURE: Life of Pi – Orts

Exactly that; close reading that strings phrases together to digest them in bites like appetizers.

It was a huge zoo, spread over numberless acres, big enough to require a train to explore it, though it seemed to get smaller as I grew older, train included.  Now it’s so small it fits in my head. (p. 15)

The Pondicherry zoo doesn’t exist any more Its pits are filled in, the cages torn down. I explore it now in the only place left for it, my memory. (p. 24)

First of all, I love the concept of "now it’s so small it fits in my head." What a lovely way to describe how memory works, and the loss of the reality as it is replaced by it in new form. It makes me think of how little difference there is between something that is seen, felt, touched, tasted, and left behind versus something that has only been read about perhaps. A simple turning around, or the closing of eyes produces the same "goneness" as something left halfway around the world. But my point is the tying in to reinforce the idea as Martel brings the notion of memory back within a few pages.

Below, he appears to again be foreshadowing a notion of religion and belief, then reinforcing it:


I have heard nearly as much nonsense about zoos as I have about God and religion. (p. 19)

I know zoos are no longer in people’s good graces. Religion faces the same problem. Certain illusions about freedom plague them both. (p. 24)

Via the narrator Pi, we learned the opposite of the general belief that people hold about animals held in captivity. Pi has explained that to an animal, the freedom is more available perhaps in a zoo, where it can depend upon safety, food, and a specific territory. The only reason an animal ranges over a larger area in the wild, he claims, is in pursuit of his needs.

I find another interesting thing about reading such a diverse group of literature; learning in a more interesting way–but that’s for another post.

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NEW MEDIA: Techno Writing

A very interesting view from Writinghood on the impact of blogging and text messaging on the written word: Is Technology Killing Writing?

I would agree with the assessment, but I think that while writing skills may be improving (LOL ur rite! notwithstanding), in my mind there’s a breakdown of the face to face communication skills that include facial expression and gestures of body language since we’ve come to depend upon all caps and exclamation points and key signs such as 🙁 to express the feeling behind the words.  There is also more of a tendency to rely on methods that really distance our relationships. And this presents a catch-22 situation perhaps; while there is wider range of communication–people we might never have had contact with otherwise whom we have reached via weblogs, social networking, and text messaging–there is also the circle that we have found we can more easily keep up with via these methods and so face to face has become the rarity. In that manner, we are indeed distancing ourselves from relationships.

There’s research I’m sure on the changes that technology has made in our interpersonal communications, just as letter writing via the U.S. mail, telegraph, telephones and two tin cans and a string have changed the nature of man.

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WRITING: Cop-outs

In editing today I found that I’m as guilty of the telling vs. showing as the worst of ’em, and in a rather odd way that I can only describe as copping out.

Here’s a sentence:

There was something magically content in the space that surrounded us and I felt changed in some way, though I couldn’t say how.

Yeah, first person pov feelings sort of need the explanation of telling rather than the guesswork that third person allows, but this sentence, which is sort of vital to the story, fell really flat. A bit better:

There was something magically content in the space that surrounded us and I felt changed in some way. Happier maybe. Hopeful.

But I’m getting sick of this story too and I think it’s time to move on. Or maybe one or two more read-throughs. One thing I’ve found with the online submissions that thankfully so many more literary journals are subscribing to, is that I tend to send something out impulsively. A day goes by and the story’s been through another few revisions and is happier for them. Which makes you want to pull out the crappy version you’ve submitted. Some allow withdrawal, but since the story still shows up in the account, how many times can a writer do this without looking like a real flake?

I know: New title.

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LITERATURE: Life of Pi – Opening Thoughts

This reverts back to Kundera’s (and I have a feeling that Kundera may be with me for life) theory on recurrence, and in particular, on Karenin’s joie de vivre being dependent upon repetition:

For that is what animals are, conservative, one might even say reactionary. The smallest changes can upset them. They want things to be just so, day after day, month after month. Surprises are highly disagreeable to them. (p. 20)

This is Martel’s philosophizing, in explanation–or rather, a rationalization–of Pi’s interest in animals after being brought up as the son of a zookeeper. This is getting interesting after my rather resistant start of the novel.

What Martel has done is clearly author intrusion by starting out the ‘novel’ with an "Author’s Note’" that gives the background of the reason and the story to follow.  I never usually read forewords, backwords, or spark notes until I’m done–unless I’m clearly lost and losing interest. I’m not sure if the "Author’s Note" then makes this work nonfiction, or whether Martel is just taking advantage of a writing device to make the story appear more personal and real, inviting closer reader involvement. Since I’m a Scorpio (translation: Well, which is it?) this put me off a bit right from the start.

Martel starts the story out with a great opening line:

My suffering left me sad and gloomy.

But then goes into a spin that gives us some information on the narrator, and even more on the two-toed sloth.  There are also some lists of animals that seem a bit too lengthy, and some crammed-in data about swimming and a peek into his early family life.

It’s definitely different, and little by little I’m opening my mind to what this author offers me, whether it be fiction or fictionalized.

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NEW MEDIA: A Rose by Any Other Name…

…but really, plurk?

Technology and new media create their own vocabulary but who in their heart of hearts will not admit they hate the word blog? I’d signed onto plurk when I couldn’t get back on twitter though twitter is certainly not an obnoxious word and now that my account has been restored (after I’d dumped it) I think I’ll likely plunk plurk.

What is it with the tempo of the times that gives us silly words for socializing and initials for our medical conditions?

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LITERATURE: Moons of Jupiter – Dulse

Maybe I’m losing my perception. Maybe I’m just overdosed on reading. This story in Alice Munro’s anthology follows a woman on a brief vacation after her relationship falls apart. It is self analysis on her part, even as written in third person, as she seeks to understand her attraction to her former lover. She is staying at a small inn where she interacts with several very different types of men. In wondering how she would have responded to these men, she seeks to discover her self that she has somehow lost in her relationship with her former lover.

It’s sort of gone on and on and I don’t really see a real focused or empathetic character in Lydia. She is rude to an elderly gentleman who is obsessed with the persona of Willa Cather, to the point where she appears to purposely hurt his feelings. It is likely that human nature with its ego of self-preservation has led her to do this as part of her own healing process.

Munro is a great storyteller of character in ways that we can usually recognize ourselves and our own flaws as well as needs. This particular story, however, didn’t really have me hooked.

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REALITY?: Coincidence

A strange one today. After waffling on whether I should go bring framing samples to a man the next town over who telephones and claims he has a Yale degree to frame but cannot drive, I finally decide that I can safely go alone. I did leave the information on my whereabouts on a note for my husband, just in case. I hate to be this way, I never used to be; yet there’s always that chance that what appears to be safe, is not.

I got there, and sure enough, it’s safe. I’m sure the man could not find another framer willing to provide the service without charging (and undercharging on the framing since he sounded like a veteran). But the strange thing is, when he asked me if I lived in Burlington all my life, I told him that no, I was originally from Derby. He said he knew a fellow from Derby, "a Clark, lived on Clark Avenue."  The man he was referring to was my neighbor.

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CURRENT AFFAIRS: More on Couric

Found the Katie Couric sit-down with Senators Obama and McCain that I referred to earlier, and in reading it, it confirms my tendency to think of her as a sub-standard journalist. She only presented on TV the two questions (the other being about elitism) and I find that rather as odd as her insistence with Governor Palin to get an answer on what magazines she reads.

However, it did make me feel a bit better about both presidential candidates (since one or the other IS going to be President and I’d like to have some confidence in either one): Senator McCain’s answer displayed a well-spoken refusal to be caught in a trap; Senator Obama displayed a humanness that eluded his mask of charisma.

(http://www.cbsnews.com/stories/2008/10/15/eveningnews/main4524998.shtml?tag=cbsBroadcasts;cbsBroadcastsContent)

Katie Couric: Why do you think so many prominent political figures risk so much by being unfaithful to their spouse?

Barack Obama: I have no idea, because my attitude is the more I’m in public, I mean, I don’t even want to pick my nose, you know. It’s, I mean, I’m assuming everybody’s watching.

And it’s just an interesting – I’ll leave that to the psychologists. But I find that, the more I’m in the public eye, the more I want to make sure that people know that … there’s no gap between who I am and the face I’m presenting to the world. You know, you want to, you want people to know that what you say is what you mean and that’s who you are.

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John McCain: I don’t know, Katie, and I don’t understand people’s personal lives. And so I can’t comment on that. I think it’s something that I am not really running for president to address, and I can’t comment on it.

Couric: Isn’t it bizarre, though, when you think about it, Senator? Elliott Spitzer, recently John Edwards, President Clinton. I think it’s very befuddling to many people in this country.

McCain: Yeah, but I also am reminded of the biblical admonition about "judge not." And so I really don’t make any comments about that because, frankly, I want to be a good president and try to lead an honorable life.

And I’ve been an imperfect servant and so I’m not judging.

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CURRENT AFFAIRS: Katie Couric’s got nothin’ on Sarah

Now what the hell was Couric thinking (besides entrapment of McCain, her bias is obvious) in asking both candidates the question of "Why would government officials risk everything to cheat on their spouse?"  Why on earth would she think that Senator Obama or Senator McCain would have the answer to that? It’s at best an opinion, and of a psychologist at that–not a question of a presidential candidate. People cheat, ALL kinds of people. And all for different reasons.

Even Couric’s questioning of the two men on the charges of their being elitists was a colossal waste of air time. What did she expect them to say?

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LITERATURE: The Unbearable Lightness Finale, The Sequel

Sometimes a thought left over from a reading kind of just sits there in your brain and I’ve been thinking again about Kundera’s ending.

Yes, the knowledge of Tomas and Tereza’s mode of death somewhere early in the novel left us waiting to come to that point and since the story leaves off with them alive and well, there are some thoughts as to its meaning, such as those I entertained in the previous post on this.

Or, there could be no meaning at all, but I think that Milan Kundera is too organized as to what he wants to say to do that.

What it might be doing is in fact confirming the notion of "the unbearable lightness of being" in that whether they live or die at this point doesn’t matter; that is the very essence of "lightness."

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LITERATURE: Up Next: Life of Pi

101408lThis novel by Yann Martel looked interesting–a boy and a tiger in a boat is certainly intriguing.

I’m not sure what I am in the mood for reading right now, and though I’m tempted to go much further back in literary history, I’m also looking for writing style right now in particular.

Also still reading Munro’s collection so I may read a story or two more there before I begin Martel.

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LITERATURE: The Unbearable Lightness of Being – Finale

I’ve reread the last few pages and must admit that I don’t think I’m getting the idea behind Kundera’s choice in closing the story.

On the one hand, it doesn’t seem to really provide resolution in the final scenario, where Tomas, Tereza, the chairman and a young man whose dislocated shoulder Tomas has easily set, go out to a bar. They spend the night–knowing that they’d be drinking and upstairs in the room, Tereza notes that once again her dream was a portent and she realizes that she’s found happiness.

On the other, Kundera has let us know several times that Tomas and Tereza were killed in a drunk driving accident. In my mind, affected by a tad of experience with hypertext story, I begin to wonder if somehow we didn’t unknowingly make a choice that brought them safely upstairs at the inn rather than out on the road heading for a deadly crash.

Possible?  Sure.  And when I say "we" made a choice, I mean just that.

Otherwise, I would think that the resolution of the story itself is when Tereza sees Tomas and realizes that they have aged.  When she tells him of her own burden of feeling that she has manipulated him into staying with her, he tells her that he is happy. Maybe the paths they have taken have indeed brought them to a point of meaning.

But if Kundera’s ending of the story is just short of the ending of Tomas and Tereza, then I am wrong. I suspect, however, that he just might have considered the difference.

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REALITY?: Insulation

Feelin’ down and recoiled in my home but had to make the trip up the hill today. Small town world about as big as I can handle now: three cars at the post office, two of them left running; nineteen turkeys make me stop so they can cross the road. Enough to make me smile.

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LITERATURE: The Unbearable Lightness – Semi-Finale

Just finished this, and I can’t really get my head around the ending right now. Tereza’s dream of Tomas turning into a rabbit appears to confirm the prior leanings towards natural instincts being more in tune with man’s potential intent. In the dream she seems to feel that she’s has at long last received what she has sought, that being, being loved.

As she watches Tomas from a distance, she realizes that her strength was in her weakness, and that it was what overcame Tomas’ strength.

Kundera seems to avoid any more discourse on theory, choosing to leave it up to his characters to clarify it by their lives.  The ending scenario doesn’t leave a strong image, yet perhaps it is that fact that means the most; that even as Tereza and Tomas have come to realize what is important in life, what matters and what doesn’t, their lives will still follow a certain course that has been laid by all their prior choices, and of course, the events that arose that presented those choices. 

More maybe tomorrow; right now my mind is trying to go over all the places I’ve been today and what I’ve done so that I have a better chance of finding a gold ring that is dear to me. What choices did I make that led me to a point where it was lost…

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REALITY?: Despair

I’ve lost my mother’s wedding band which I have worn for four years now.

I feel like throwing up.

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