REALITY?: Wining

080408rGetting ready to bottle last year’s product.  Here, the overage (what doesn’t fit in the carboys) of peach, crabapple and grape.  The clarifier worked beautifully (the grape is in a frosted bottle) and made the wine sparkling bright.

Being on a clear liquid diet, I sort of thought this might be the right time to do the wine..

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Then there’s the carboys,grape on the right and the harvest in front; the crabapple behind it.

Right now I’m setting up the prep work by washing the bottles and making sure I have enough bottles and corks so that once I get going, nothing stops the bottling process.

Then, I relax before the next harvest is ready to pick.

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LITERATURE: The Old Forest – A Bit of a Drag

The next story in this collection is A Friend and Protector and while Taylor’s skill still shines in the area of character development and subtlety, this particular story didn’t wow me quite to the state that a couple of the other stories have. 

Taylor likes to show the relationship between blacks and whites of the south at a time between the abhorrence of slavery and the true rights and freedom that was not achieved for the century following the civil war. While many whites may still have harbored prejudice, many others tried to offer some sense of justice though by an overcompensation in ways that only made the difference more prominent. There is an ignorance that pervades even those who appear to be free of bias, and perhaps it is this that makes the characters more real.

Another story called A Walled Garden is an example of one of Taylor’s other favored themes, that being the relationship between parent and child.  There is an oddness about the way the first person narrator, a mother, describes her daughter to a young man. Just in the manner of its telling, the reader tends to take a closer look at the narrator rather than the character she is speaking of.  There is a glossing over, a sense that the teller of the story knows something is wrong and is making excuses for her (or his) own actions in explaining the outcome.

Maybe these two don’t quite measure up to the some of the other short stories here, but they are still well done.  Taylor’s use of language is elaborate, not depending upon imagery or drama as much as detail and full accounting of events in which his characters move.  Since he often uses the first person narrator to tell the story, we realize that the perception will be skewed and this is where Taylor is brilliant; in showing us the character of the narrator as she or he tells the story. 

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REVIEWS: The Handbag – A Note From the Author

Back in spring, in a course in Creative Writing, I did some brief reviews on all the stories in Flash Fiction Forward, one of the anthologies of short-shorts and The Handbag by Michael Augustin was one of my favorites.

In a very simple tale of purse-snatching, Augustin carries the struggle between robber and victim to an extreme that is completely delightful and my only complaint was that I would’ve liked the story to be less of a short-short and maybe a bit longer. 

Well, just got a comment (check link above to my posting) from Mr. Augustin and he kindly let me know that there is a book available of his work called Mickle Makes Muckle that I’ve already added to my wish list at Amazon.  These short story anthologies are one of the best ways to "try" authors, and it is the way I’e discovered William Gay whose novels I’ve already been into and loved.

I’m really excited about the book and will likely include it in my next order.   

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NEW MEDIA LITERATURE: Shadow of the Stars – Preview

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Our good buddies Josh & Kas Radke have a preview of Kas’ book, Shadow of the Stars on their website of the newly formed Grail Quest Books.

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The ten-page preview gives the background of this epic that Kas has written, and is due to be completed before the end of summer.  There are some awesome graphics and I particularly like the choice of colors that are bold and bright and show the detail of the action.

I’m looking forward to publication and take the opportunity now to congratulate this hardworking and talented couple!

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REALITY?: Garden Update

Bummer. The first year I’ve got tomatoes–the big ones–early, the plants have contracted fusarium wilt from the soil.  The yellow squash are getting eaten off at the bud now that the plants have finally grown, and some of the cucumber and butternut squash are dying off as well.  All this, in a practically weed-free, weekly fed environment.  I think the garden soil is tired after eighteen years and this autumn is the time to move it elsewhere.

On the good side, the dill is full and feathery and ready to be pulled and dried.  The pepper plants have caught up to the peppers and we’ve got bell, thai, jalapenos and habaneros almost ready (forgive the lack of the tilde or whatever it is I need).  The flowers are doing okay, and soon I should be able to pick some bouquets to cheer me up.

On the super duper good side, the grapes are so heavy for harvest that I could open up a winery this year.  No peaches 🙁 but the crabapples, between our tree and Gus’, should produce at least 10 gallons of wine if I don’t make jelly or crabapple sauce. 

And, there’re loads of pears.

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LITERATURE: Black Swan Green – Theme

I would almost say that the underlying theme in this novel is struggle and change.  Jason, through the space of a few months (summer and now into the school year) faces some challenge in each of the chapters and we cheer him on as he overcomes and grows.  But there are several threads of struggle that wind through each chapter from the very beginning. 

One is, of course, his personal struggle to master his speech and eliminate or at least sidestop the stutter that affects his confidence and his interactions with others.  The other is the situation with the relationship between his father and mother.  The story opens with a mysterious phone call wherein the caller hangs up without speaking.  We suspect a mistress. What Mitchell shows us are no direct confrontations. He shows us the mother speaking with her sister about some suspicions.  He shows us the mother and father arguing about money being spent.  We see Jason accompany his father on a business trip and get a clearer picture of the man and his shortcomings as well as his fears.  We see Jason with his mother, now an entrepreneur, and how she has managed to cope with the situation in her marriage by becoming successful.

And through it all, we see Jason’s growing understanding of others as he himself is in a constant battle with bullies.

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LITERATURE: Black Swan Green – Empathy

One thing that Mitchell seems to be quite good at doing is bringing in bits of Jason’s thoughts that the reader can well relate to from past experience:

Teachers’re always using that "in your own words."  I hate that.  Authors knit their sentences tight.  It’s their job.  Why make us unpick them, just to put it back together more shonkily?  How’re you s’posed to say Kapellmeister if you can’t say Kapellmeister?  (p. 210)

These is an underlying poignancy about Jason and how he deals with popularity among his peers, his interest in girls, and his concern about his parents’ fighting.  These are all things that many of us have experienced in one way or another. There is that one big problem of his stuttering that runs throughout the novel tying them all together. The speech impediment may indeed be a metaphor for adolescence.

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WRITING: Sound Perspective

the sky grumbles
like a pride of lions at
a kill or
is it just a whisper
to a giant or a god . . .

does one shout into
a conch shell
or does one
listen to the waves
reverberate

the fragile spirals
like the chambers
of a heart
that sings and shrieks,
hears and closes out

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REALITY?: Why Old People Need to Die

I do not know why they are, in this day of high medical and insurance costs not to mention GenX and their projeny bitterly complaining about how we’re going to use up all ‘their’ social security, sending us all through ‘preventive care’ tests to try to extend our lives.  We need to die out and the sooner the better.

The main reason is not the above, but rather to allow to fade into myth the memories of a better product–regardless of the cost.

Here’s a can of crabmeat that’s about the same size my mom would use to feed her family of five, only when you drained out the water, it was full, unlike this:
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Hell, I remember when you opened a can of coffee and you could see the triple ringed indentation in the grounds–so don’t give me the “some settling of contents in shipment” b.s.

And here’s what blew my mind this morning: a coat rack that promised top quality construction that I purchased (3) from Target (manufacturer, Whitmor, Model “Supreme Garment Rack) 080108r2
that I’ve gotten frustrated with assembling, found at one point that two of their rods were not able to be screwed into place, and tried one last time to at least get two out of three up.

Despite their claims for top quality stainless steel heavy duty material, and the cost of these at about $70 each, the jackasses who designed them have little stupid plastic parts holding the top and bottom racks in place–guess how long those lasted?

And yet I have three other racks I’ve had for thirty years that hold the heavy woolden coats and are in perfect shape.  They’re only a light gauge stainless, no where near the weight of these, yet because some engineer was smart enough to know that a chain’s only as strong as its weakest link and passed on using plastic, they’re fine.

See now, this is what the next generation doesn’t want to know; how to make things last the way generations prior to them managed somehow to do.

On yeah; and we knew how to fill a can of crabmeat or coffee.

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NEW MEDIA LITERATURE: KaPOW!

Just glanced at it but wanted to immediately share this preview story from the new publishing outfit, Grail Quest Books–our friends, Josh and Kas Radke. Beautiful graphics–just outstanding artwork and design so far:
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LITERATURE: Black Swan Green – Stages

There is a relationship here between the chapters that Mitchell uses as stages both in the maturing of his character and the setting within which the character is placed to face a challenge. 

From a childish worry of being accepted by his peers to the relationship with an old woman who appreciates his poetry, Jason has grown in his understanding of the world and his place within it.  He has learned to deal with various scenarios that call for choices to be made and demons to be faced and with each trial we see him establishing a more adult outlook.

From Chapter 1 we recognized a problem of sorts in the marriage of his father and mother.  We see a strained relationship between Jason and his dad, one that is both loving yet distanced by the father’s preoccupation with his job, and possible, with a mistress.  When Jason goes on an overnight business trip with his father there is opportunity for both insight and a change in their relationship.  Mitchell handles this beautifully varying between disappointment and those few moments of sharing that glue them together.

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WRITING: 100 Images

A reminder to check out the exquisite merge of the poetry of Steve Ersinghaus with the watercolors of Carianne Mack on Mediaplay.

These two have committed to producing 100 daily images of visual and language art and are winding down into the final quarter of the project this month. I believe this duo will be placing the work on display at a showing some time soon and will post dates as soon as something has been established.  In the meanwhile, enjoy this "preview"  that the wonderful world of the internet has provided. 

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REALITY?: Negativity

My strength has always been in my belief in the power of negativity.  I know, I know, and yes there are times when it weighs you down, such as in recent interviews when my distant past as secretary to presidents and vice presidents of corporations makes me less than cheerful as I sit in judgment for a clerk-typist job.  Whatever makes them think, I wonder, that I was smarter at age eighteen than I am now? But then it came down to attitude and maybe mindless bubbly would have been more fulfilling of their needs somehow.

But that’s the instance when the less than confident approach can hurt me, and only in that way–when I let it show.  Negativity used positively works just the opposite; it prepares me by asking all the questions first, i.e., I’ll never be able to do this…unless I (fill in the blank with an idea or solution).

There’s also other good negativity.  Like in a biopsy report.

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LITERATURE: The Old Forest – Bad Dreams

The story is simple: A well-to-do man brings an old black man home to live in a room in the barn loft, where his butler and maid, a young black married couple already occupy two rooms and the only bathroom there along with their infant daughter.

The young woman, Emmaline, is outraged.  She is both frightened that they are being subtly pushed out because of the baby, and there is the deeper fear; the man represents the dirt poor family and town she’s left behind.  Emmaline is overly dramatic and frantic with her worries which enables her husband, Bert, to take advantage of her fears by reminding her of an old crazy woman they both remember from their childhood, and comparing her to the woman. 

Peter Taylor’s story’s are character driven, focusing on their foibles and flaws and his revelations come little by little, as he allows us to learn more and more about them.  What they say to each other is often not what they feel but rather much is done in a self-protective mode. 

Taylor brings the characters together in a moment of drama as the baby’s screaming cries wakes the three adults up and they try to console her.  Each is still struggling with their own emotions as they face each other.  The old man is finally the one to lull the baby quiet, but we finally get to see him as he is, another human being with his own fears to overcome.

Just an awesome story and one that will, like Promise of Rain, stay with me a long time.

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LITERATURE: The Old Forest – Whew!

Just got totally blown away by Taylor’s Bad Dreams

Leaves me speechless.

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