LITERATURE: Touchpad Tricks

Well, since learning the touchpad versus the mouse on the Mac, I’ve found that the same thing happens when I get the itch and visit amazon.com and look over my wish list.  I tap rather than click, but the result is the same:  a batch of new books due in next week. 

But here’s the rationale: "Hit ’em where it hurts" Connecticut legislators are about to put into effect yet another heavy tax on its residents, and that’s a delivery tax.  This on top of their heavy gasoline tax which has already upped the prices on shipping.

I’ll let you all know what I got when I get ’em. 

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REALITY?: Peter, Paul, and Mary

I think I’ve several posts over the year just like this one.  Peter, Paul and Mary on PBS.  Of course I watch until they get to the inevitable point: Puff the Magic Dragon.  Someday I’ll learn to flip the channel at the first notes.

Instead of sitting here crying like an idiot.

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WRITING: Getting in Touch

In this case, with my dark side.  Oh c’mon; we all have it.  Even Jim has shown a bit of his in Vinny the Vulture’s rending of the freshly dead deer.

Brought up on old traditional nasties such as Red Riding Hood and Cinderella and Snow White (think about it–they are beautifully violent and evil) and a Polish version of Three Little Kittens that would scare the bejeesus out of any child when told in my mother’s wondrously animated style of reading story, I took immediately to Poe.  Stephen King.  Straub. True murder mysteries.  All the darkness I could absorb, I did. 

So naturally this wants to come out eventually.  Rather than attack the idiot at the cash register who can’t figure out change, or the client who shows up in one week telling me I’d told her her piece would be ready, or my spouse, the better, more humane way for release of evil thoughts is via writing story. But  tone and style of story need to come from  mood; to develop a voice that’s anything but bright and cheerful.  So I think.

What I need to do is sit and remember all those things and people who have ever truly pissed me off.

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LITERATURE: If on a winter’s night… – Purpose?

This is a book, most of all, about reading I believe; and for the writer, a book about how a book is read should be of utmost value.  Know thine enemy.  Know your audience.

Back in reader mode of Chapter 3, we see another element of writing/reading as focus; that of reader experience brought to the reading which in effect changes what is read.Calvino also touches here on relevance and necessary grounding to make a reader interested in what is being read.

And he seems to mean "or Ludmilla?"  But he doesn’t finish the sentence; and to be sincere you should answer that you can no longer distinguish your interest in the Cimmerian novel from your interest in the Other Reader of that novel. (p. 51)

While this simply defines your interest in the girl, the Other Reader, now given the name Ludmilla, as you explain your purpose in coming to meet a professor who is an expert on Cimmerian literature, it does to me reflect the notion of reality/fiction bonding in areas of similarity borne of experience.  Here it becomes a bit clearer:

Now, moreover, the professor’s reactions at the name Ludmilla, coming after Irnerio’s confidences, cast mysterious flashes of light, create about the Other Reader an apprehensive curiosity not unlike that which binds you to Zwida Ozkart, in the novel whose continuation you are hunting for, and also to Madame Marne in the novel you had begun to read the day before and have temporarily put aside, and here you are in pursuit of all these shadows together, those of the imagination and those of life. (p. 51)

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LITERATURE: Well, neat!

I don’t mind the heavy Google traffic here that leads to the literary reviews I’ve done; the short story The Swimmer had nearly single-handedly built Spinning up to what it is today. But it’s especially nice when a teacher links me to her class assignment as a "literature weblog–very  helpful resource for this text."

The school is St. Francis de Sales; the text is Gabriel Garcia Marquez’s One Hundred Years of Solitude which will always stand as one of my very favorite novels of all time.

It keeps ya goin’.

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LITERATURE: If on a winter’s night… – Layers

I’d noticed this before but there’s an instance here that illustrates how Calvino touches on so many areas within one fell swoop of his pen:

Every moment you discover there is a new character, you don’t know how many people there are in this immense kitchen of ours, it’s no use counting, there were always many of us, at Kudgiwa, always coming and going: the sum never works out properly because different names can belong to the same character, indicated according to the circumstances by baptismal name, nickname, surname or patronymic, and even by appellations such as "Jan’s widow," or "the apprentice from the corn shop."  But what counts are the physical details that the novel underlines–Bronko’s gnawed nails, the down on Brigd’s cheeks–and also the gestures, the utensils that this person or that is handling–the meat pounder, the colander for the cress, the butter curler–so that each character already receives a first definition through this action or attribute; but then we wish to learn even more, as if the butter curler already determined the character and the fate of the person who is presented in the first chapter handling a butter curler, and as if you, Reader, were already prepared, each time that character is introduced again in the course of the novel, to cry, "Ah, that’s the butter curler one!" thus obligating the author to attribute to him acts and events in keeping with that initial butter curler. (p. 35)

Wow.  This is just the cat’s meow.  In this one paragraph we have so much to learn.

"Every moment you discover there is a new character,": This tells me that until you read further, you will not know, though you are sitting in the middle of this story, who else is in the room until the author writes it in.  A fascinating concept; simple, but true.

Calvino then goes on: "the sum never works out properly because different names can belong to the same character…"  Shades of Dostoevsky and every other annoying Russian writers who loves to confuse!  Is Calvino pointing out a writing ploy?

"But what counts are the physical details that the novel underlines–(…)and also the gestures, the utensils…"  I believe Calvino is doing several things here.  He is focusing the reader on this portion of the story, perhaps hinting that he go back and look for a ‘butter-curler’ or some such thing that shall prove to be important to the story.  He is also telling us that this is what he is doing; and in doing so, is bringing the author into the storyworld where he and you are the reality figures living in the same space as these fictional characters of the novel. 

And third, he’s giving us a nice lesson in how to write: "Ah, that’s the butter-curler one!" thus obligating the author to attribute to him acts and events in keeping with that initial butter-curler.

Good God,how did the man think of all this?

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LITERATURE: If on a winter’s night… – 2nd Person POV

Chapter 2 (!) brings us back into the reading mode of the book, that is, the narrator addressing us as ‘you’ and telling us how to go about returning Calvino’s book because it appears to be a printer’s error in how it’s put together.

The bookseller maintains his composure. "Ah, you, too?  I’ve had several complaints already.  And only this morning I received a form letter from the publisher.  You see?  ‘In the distribution of the latest works on our list a part of the edition of the volume If on a winter’s night a traveler by Italo Calvino has proved defective and must be withdrawn from circulation.’ (p. 28)

Whereby the bookseller points to a young woman who has just returned the book.  This gives ‘you’ opportunity to meet her:

And so the Other Reader makes her happy entrance into your field of vision; or, rather, into the field of your attention; or, rather, you have entered a magnetic field from whose attraction you cannot escape. (p. 29)

And here’s the sticky wicket with second person pov: it may not suit you as reader to become the ‘you’ of Calvino’s (or anybody else’s–I wrote a second person pov short story once that involved the reader’s appraisal of ‘her’ own naked body) image of you as reader.

Obviously, this Other Reader holds a certain attraction to ‘you’ as more than a fellow literature enthusiast; ‘you’ think she’s hot.  Huh?

Well just as Roland Barthes has taught me that reader changes story, story changes reader is often a more readily accepted fact of life.  So there should be no problem for me here.  I tend to think more like a man than a woman (stereotyping, I know, but there are biological differences and proof that cognitive forces are influenced by gender–and I’m not saying "smarter"; I’m saying "different") in many ways.  It’s just that picking up a girl has never been one of them.

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REALITY?: Why I Love My Man

Similar middle-class backgrounds and age group may sustain us through a merging into marriage of two Scorpios when one is in the ‘up’ mode, the other ‘down’.  But eighteen years of wedlock also emphasize the differences and luckily we may upon occasion compromise without the necessary bend to breaking state of bliss.

Him: You know you should turn off the furnace for the day now that we don’t need it for the heat and only for hot water…

Me: (with huge grin)  My  dad would be so proud of you.

Him:  I always liked your father.

Me: And if he were alive today and heard you, I’m sure he’d have liked you too.

In truth, I have an absolutely awesome black & white photo, taken by my niece for a college course, of my dad and Him with heads together over something that maybe now I’m emotionally ready to frame up and hang.

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WRITING: Uh, why?

Nice post today at Charles Deemer’s The Writing Life that touches on the desire to write and the desire to make a living at it, and what may happen along the way. 

Charles has prepared a hyperdrama that will be presented at the Hypertext 08 seminarn workshops in Pittsburgh in June.

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LITERATURE: If on a winter’s night… – The Fourth Wall?

I know what the term means in the reality/fiction barrier between narrative and reader, and when it is breached to bring the reader into the story.  This Calvino does to a degree, not by inviting the reader completely into the environment, but by reaching out in what might be considered an "aside" in stage terms (I believe) to form a connection that passes information between narrator and reader in a much more intimate manner than a mere recollection of events.

The breaking of the barrier is done by the character within the story–but he usually does not go beyond the storyworld in invitation.  Calvino has his character disengage himself from the storyworld at least to have one foot in, one foot out and firmly planted by the reader’s side as he is turning pages.  The character appears to read along with the reader. 

In this portion, the narrator admits that all he knows is in effect what we know: he is in a strange train station at night, is carrying baggage that he expects to exchange with someone who is supposed to meet him and utter a code sentence.  This is the stuff of intrigue and yet it is examined in a way that the reader normally needs to do all by himself.  The conflict then is there and building as we follow him in his worries of having missed his accomplice.  Calvino then neatly introduces the background flavor at the station bar, including a couple of the characters and the narrator’s interaction, and voila! it all comes back to plot and story and he is met and hurried out of there aboard the next train out.

It was exciting in a way that overexplanation should have tainted it but didn’t.  For all I knew, as reader, and confidante of the narrator, the person he was anxious to be meeting may well have been me!

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LITERATURE: If on a winter’s night… – Mind Games

Never has an author or a book–at least any that I have read–involved my full attention quite so much not out of difficulty but rather out of an intimacy Calvino forms with the reader who is willing to accept his lead.

You, reader, believed that there, on the platform, my gaze was glued to the hands of the round clock of an old station, hands pierced like halberds, in the vain attempt to turn them back, to move backward over the cemetery of spent hours, lying lifeless in their circular pantheon.  But who can say that the clock’s numbers aren’t peeping from rectangular windows, where I see every minute fall on me with a click like the blade of a guillotine?  However, the result would not change much: even advancing in a pokished, sliding world, my hand contracted on the light rudder of the wheeled suitcase would still express an inner refusal, as if that carefree luggage represented for me an unwelcome and exhausting burden. (p. 13)

In lieu of a defined visual of the train station, Calvino offers some suggestions that we might imagine in one time period or another; hanging the trappings a bit and as he notes, the outcome remaining the same.

He plays with space obviously; but time–symbolized by the clock that we are not to take literally–is manipulated as well.  Time as measure is described in its physical form.  In other words, as I see it, an old fashioned wall hung stainless steel clock, with hands moving the minutes and hours will indicate a time further back in space that will match an old train station–though again, perhaps in its own newness of state of being.  A digital indicator of time will call up a different image of the train station, the traveler himself. 

No, we don’t get into the author’s head here–and never should we; but the narrator’s is open to us as is the case in first person point of view.  But here’s the twist: he has entered our’s–the readers’–as well.

Love it!

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WRITING: Woe is me.

Maybe it’s the familiarity after fifty readings.  Maybe it’s the deadlines–self-imposed, but surely there.  No submissions ready before the summer cutoffs, nothing new with punch. 

I smack of novice; creative writing course form and story.  Only BoB was worth the effort over and above the albeit valuable writing practice.  I worry that I’ve reached the peak and it is a plateau.

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STORIES: Musical Background

Who knows what lyrics linger in the mind to reincarnate as story? Dolly, Linda, & EmmyLou:

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WRITING: First Person POV and Grammar

Very good post at Conversational Reading wherein Scott tackles the fine points of unreliable first person narrator and focuses on the grammatical skill of the teller of story. 

I’ve come up against this many times in my own writing–both questions: unreliability and grammar use–just recently in a short bio as well as in both of my latest short stories.  In Walking Away, the first person narrator is someone with whom the reader may empathize until some little details come out that subtly hint at a personality he attempts to hide beneath condescension and controlled behavior.  In A Phone Call Away, there are some of the finest examples of run-on sentences ever written, though the story is in the intimate second person pov.

It’s fun to experiment, and only skill can overcome the presence of a poorly structured sentence.  And only practice can lead to proficiency of breaking grammar rules.  Personally, I practice breaking rules as often as I can.

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STORIES: Walking Away – Draft #4

Between sessions at the Writers Festival yesterday and some creative time this morning I’ve reworked this story and looked again at the new one before I moved onto the Storyspace piece, The Hanging.  I’ve been away from it for quite a while and it feels fresh and new to me and luckily, is haunting me again.

So, with CW classes nearly over, and the many May deadlines for text literature so close, I’m polishing these two pieces up to get back into perhaps submitting them to some lit journals just for grins.  I need credentials.  For now, it looks like my best hope is still traditional means rather than the path of hypertext.

So, not necessarily final until the envelopes and cover letter are addressed, the latest on Walking Away.pdf

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