LITERATURE:Something Wicked… – Key Elements

Within the first forty pages of this novel, I already can see all the key elements of story.  Bradbury is, of course, an accomplished writer and so goes by the best rules of fiction.

His main characters, Will and Jim, are well developed and maybe the best example of using another character, Will’s father, can describe their friendship despite their differences:

So there they go.  Jim running slower to stay with Will, Will running faster to stay with Jim.  Jim breaking two windows in a haunted house because Will’s along, Will breaking one window instead of none because Jim’s watching.  God, how we get our fingers in each other’s clay. (p. 18)

Bradbury produces conflict within this relationship, as Jim wants to visit an old house where they’ve seen strange things:

"Will, please…"
>Will looked at Jim now, with the library books in his hands.
"We been to the library.  Ain’t that enough? 
Jim shook his head.  "Carry these for me." 
He handed Will his books and trotted softly off under the hissing whispering trees.  Three houses down he called back:  "Will?  Know what you are? A darn old dimwit Episcopal Baptist!" 
Then Jim was gone.
(p. 29)

Bradbury plots his story out, leading us from page one where the boys meet the salesman, through town, through the meeting with Will’s father at the library, through the streets while there are subtle hints of both danger and excitement.  A carnival is coming to town: strange scents of licorice and cotton candy (appealing to the senses), a block of ice large enough to hold within its crystal clarity a beautiful woman, flyers promising the incredible.  Step by step we are moved into an area of expectation, remembering the threat of a storm with killing lightning.  Aided to be wary of the carnival as Will points out that carnivals don’t come in the night as this one appears to, nor do they travel in October in the Midwest.

The imagery, narrative structure, conflict, character, story and tension are all in here.  Built with ease by Bradbury without sacrificing any element one to another. 

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WRITING: Meaning

Someone just sent me this via e-mail this morning, and after I laughed, I saw within it (that’s meaning!) something that would be relevant to readers and writers alike:

The Lone Ranger and Tonto went camping in the desert.
After they got their tent all set up, both men fell sound asleep.
Some hours later, Tonto wakes the Lone Ranger and says,

"Kemo Sabe, look towards sky; what you see?"
The Lone Ranger replies, "I see millions of stars."
"What that tell you?" asked Tonto.
The Lone Ranger ponders for a minute then says,

Astronomically speaking, it tells me there are millions of galaxies.
Time wise, it appears to be approximately a quarter past three in the morning.
Theologically, the Lord is all powerful and we are small and insignificant.
Meteorologically, it seems we will have a beautiful day tomorrow.

What’s it tell you, Tonto?"

"You dumber than buffalo dung.   Someone stole tent."

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LITERATURE: Something Wicked This Way Comes – Grand Opening

What a lovely darkly ominous opening:

The seller of lightning rods arrived just ahead of the storm.  He came along the street of Green Town, Illinois, in the late cloudy October day, sneaking glances over his shoulder.  Somewhere not so far back, vast lightnings stomped the earth.  Somewhere, a storm like a great beast with terrible teeth could not be denied.  (p. 5)

This is how Chapter 1 starts out, with a brief prologue that gives us the time of year, October, and warnings of Halloween coming early that year.

I remember Bradbury from the fifties and early sixties; Alfred Hitchcock Presents, Twilight Zone.  It surprises me a bit that my mom and dad watched these, and now, too late to ask them if they enjoyed the bizarre, which one of them handed down their genes for delight in the macabre.  Bradbury sets a scene that’s always a little bit askew.  Maple-lined streets with a Dodge or an Olds in the driveways of neat little white Capes or Federal Colonials with huge railed-in porches that led up to oak doors with etched curlicued glass.  Sometimes a Pontiac, sometimes a Ford station wagon sat stuffed with a mom and a dad and two loud laughing boys in plaid shirts and jeans; their little priss sister in pink organdy. 

Something, though, is a bit out of order, and Dad may be dead by the end of the show.

In SWTWC, the salesman tells the boys that one of their houses will be hit and destroyed, and since they have no money, gives them free a lightning rod engraved with signs and symbols of different languages.  The boys are best friends: blond, amiable Will Halloway and dark-haired, secretive and gutsy Jim Nightshade. It is Nightshade’s house that will take the hit, so says the salesman, and Will talks Jim into putting the rod up on the roof.

Two innocent boys laying on a lawn in October, proud of their summer days spent.  Peaceful, or so it would seem, until Bradbury draws a character to upset their lives.

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LITERATURE: Ficciones – Tlon, etc.

This one will definitely be re-read, likely when I finish the rest of the stories in this book. 

Borges would be someone I would definitely love to sit and spend a few hours with.  That is, if he spoke English because my Spanish has been all but forgotten (another one of those things to do–brush up on it).  And too, if he were still alive.  But maybe he is; or never was.

Tlon, Uqbar, Orbis Tertius is a very strange little story and one that is ripe with metaphor–if you wish.  Borges leaves much up to the reader, incites him to take the text and run away with imagination. The denouement is not that at all, but instead poses a bigger question: has our history been written by men who tell truth or lies? The narrator himself is in the process of rewriting.  He hints that things that exist now will not, but rather be transformed into a Tlon-like planet with language and science so changed as to be unrecognizable.  But then, who would care, since readers in the future would read and believe what is written and that becomes the new truth.

I think I’m in love again with Borges.  If when I cease to exist here or in fact never did, I will hope there is another plane, another time and space where he is accessible, maybe lives down the street, two houses away, and would join me in an aperitif and some talk.

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TECHNOLOGY: Computer #2 down

It never rains but it pours.  Now the house computer won’t turn on.  It’s similar to what happened to the laptop, although it does fire up but I get nothing on the screen.  However, it’s not the screen because the printer won’t turn on and the DVD doesn’t light up.  It wouldn’t be just the hard drive because the computer should still go on without a hard drive, just not get into the operating system.

Fiddled around inside it a bit, but everything seems okay.  Guess this will be another thing on my "to do" list this week.

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LITERATURE: Ficciones – Tlon…etc.

I don’t think you can read Borges without the man himself being within the story.  In this particular short story, he places himself there.

A writer to a fellow writer:

The whole affair happened some five years ago.  Bioy Casares had dined with me that night and talked to us at length about a great scheme for writing a novel in the first person, using a narrator who 0mitted or corrupted what happened and who ran into various contradictions, so that only a handful of readers, a very small handful, would be able to decipher the horrible or banal reality behind the novel.  (p. 17)

So what Borges is doing here is adding the real to the unreality of fiction.  First person pov, himself.  He’s also hinting at what is to come–a jest, perhaps, or a true lie.  And this is what the story itself becomes, a lie about a lie that has been taken as truth.  The discovery of this strange planet of Tlon, and in particular, the place known as Uqbar, has a history that is somewhat proven by references in text, previously unknown or perhaps just hidden.  He goes into some detail about language, making this knowledge, together with the credibility of the narrator, become something it is not, that is, real.

What he’s telling us too, I think, is that what is written cannot be trusted.  For in the history of Uqbar, there is the firm belief that what exists cannot be trusted.  Some things exist only temporarily, some just for the few who need to see them.  Just before the final closing of the story, is the closing of the research story:

Things duplicate themselves in Tlon.  They tend at the same time to efface themselves, to lose their detail when people forget them.  The classic example is that of a stone threshold which lasted as long as it was visited by a beggar, and which faded from sight on his death.  Occasionally, a few birds, a horse perhaps, have saved the ruins of an amphitheater. (p. 30)

I don’t pretend to quite grasp the full (or perhaps multifaceted) meaning of this short story, but I think that Borges is having fun.  Having fun with his free-association way of thinking, and having fun with turning it over to the reader to do some of his own.

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LITERATURE: Ficciones – TLON,UQBAR, ORBIS TERTIUS

Just halfway through this first story in the Borges collection, but I can say it is quite intriguing.  Borges is concept-driven I suspect, and as he twists his own mind in wonderment, he enjoys doing the same to the readers.

The concept on this is the narrator being drawn into a mystery of lands that may or may not exist, as written in text of books that while printed and marked as the same, differ in what they include.

The land and the people? Language without nouns, depending on adjectives.  Words that are transitory in nature, exist only once perhaps and describing things and places that may or may not exist at all.

Like I said, intriguing.

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LITERATURE: McCarthy Interview

What a nice man, Cormac McCarthy.  Hard to believe that such images that show up in his books come from this soft-spoken, gentle and unassuming man.

But then again, one of his statements stayed with me: "You can’t plot things out.  You just have to trust where they come from." From what he said, it looks like while he can pinpoint several instances that inspired The Road but he really didn’t know as he was writing it exactly where it was heading.  Perhaps that’s why his images are so acute; they are something he’s seen that has affected him enough to remain in memory.  His landscapes are likely not something he’s trying to build, but something he remembers, as he remembers it for the reason it’s remained with him.

While Oprah may have had the very rare opportunity to sit with him, this is someone I would just love to sit and talk with.  Not just about literature and writing, but just about life.  That’s what comes out in his writing surely.

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TECHNOLOGY: Print On Demand

“Perfect Systems is proud to announce the first fully variable format bound paperback book manufacturing machine, the Perfect Book 040.”

Video

Frankly, watching the movie made me think “old and clunky” because if it’s printing one single copy, I sure hope the film clip is going at slow-speed just to show how it works.  Actually, the website claims that the Espresso Machine produces 15 to 20 books per hour, and I’ve no idea if that’s good or bad–likely good, I suppose.

Now where I can put it?

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LITERATURE: Next Up – Ficciones

Ficciones (English Translation)

Two at once this time, just because if I’m not going to be writing, then it’s the time to enjoy diversity and Borges fits that bill.

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LITERATURE: Next Up: Something Wicked This Way Comes

Something Wicked This Way Comes

I’ve always liked Ray Bradbury, first became familiar with him through the old television shows and then the movies.  I was just in the mood for something very different from what I’ve been reading lately and with three or four Bradbury’s on the shelf, and being on the first shelf, it was an easy choice.

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LITERATURE: Rabbit, Run – Finale

Well, Rabbit did what was expected of him–secretly in everyone’s mind of course, as what was expected of him was that he behave responsibly, putting his family above his own passions and perplexities.   This is perhaps the theme of Updike’s Rabbit, Run, rather than to consider it a moral: Decisions made must be carried through, regardless of the the fact that they may have been made in the ignorance of youth or the simple twists and turns life takes changes things, changes people.

While I might not feel that the characters were an allegory of family life of that period of time in America because they were too finely drawn, most readers can relate to Rabbit’s questioning of his life, his dissatisfaction with how things turned out.  His wife is an alcoholic, yet Updike’s method of putting us into her head show us what led her there.  Rabbit’s run to Ruth and his behavior with her was a need for ego-strokes that he felt he wasn’t getting any more, especially missed since his high school days when he was a hot-shot ballplayer. 

There is a thread of generations, both Rabbit’s parents and his wife Janice’s play fairly important roles as figures of authority, symbols of "doing the right thing."  There is a contrast in what they do and what they say; there is dishonesty for sake of appearances and sacrifices made for happiness and maybe that’s one of the reasons why they’re not so hard on Rabbit.  They’ve all felt the urge, the realization that for what their lives have become, that’s all there is.  Secretly they may have cheered him on yet felt guilty for doing so.

But is Rabbit deserving of their understanding, or even ours?  I’m in no way a women’s libber and yet I couldn’t accept (though of course, even in fiction as in reality, accept I must) Rabbit’s lack of comprehension of anyone else’s feelings, of how his actions would affect their lives.  It seemed more than a lack of caring and not on an emotional level since when something serious happened, such as the baby’s death or in facing people after deserting his wife, he seemed to know how he was supposed to act, was overly grateful for their help and forgiveness.  But wasn’t it just so that he could feel good about himself?  Isn’t this often what people do to fit back in among society?

Updike’s narrator has a voice that is totally inobtrusive to the story;  in fact, in thinking about it now, it is so dispassionate that it makes me wonder how so much was told in such detail. Perhaps because this is a character-driven story the telling was perceived to be coming from within the characters themselves, making the narrator truly a relator of story.

There are symbols that Updike offers us to make of them what we will.  The rose window of the church across from Ruth’s apartment; is it a source of comfort or a beacon as in the end of the story, Rabbit seeks it out for light.  There are many references to his heart, and yet it’s hard for me to see it as a warm and living thing that means a love for fellowman; Rabbit is self-centered and even as he holds his son it is often for his own comfort rather than for the child’s.

The story here is simple: a young man, fed up with lost opportunity and feeling maneuvered by routine and responsibility makes his escape.  He doesn’t go far, comes nearly back, hooking up with a hooker for a couple months.  He lies to her of his love–or maybe he just doesn’t really understand what love should be–and leaves her in the middle of a night when he’s called out to witness the birth of his second child.  Strange, he’s never called his wife to let her know where he’d gone, never needed to see his son.  He easily accepts help from others: his former coach, Ruth, and his wife’s clergyman, Eccles. Eccles sees Rabbit as a personal challenge, trying hard to guide him yet we see his own sense of disillusionment in people and relationships. 

There is no doubt that Rabbit can be understood; there is doubt that at least for now, he’s anything more that a real prick.  Updike may have set us up for this, to make a moral judgement of a man who represents a realization and last grab for change, to make his own life better even at the expense to others.  I’m not sure that Updike hasn’t made Rabbit a bit unlikeable just so we don’t relate too closely, so that we can still say, yeah, I understand but I’d never do that without at least…

An excellent read, excellent writing style and way of bringing the reader deeply into the brief time span of conflicts within a small group of people.  I’m not sure, however, that I like Rabbit enough to find out how his life unrolls by reading the three subsequent novels in the series.  Likely I will, but I’m reluctant right now to forgive Rabbit as easily as everyone else has done.  Do I care?  We’ll see.

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REALITY?: Boundaries, Borders, Fences, Space

Just finished Updike’s Rabbit, Run–I’ll post a final on it in a bit. It has me thinking.

Last night a thought: You’re all that I have left.  It hit me then, the space that we’re alloted is a constant shifting of limits, changes made by lives, by death, by someone else’s say-so.  Extensions made as permits to temporarily step into another’s space; elsewise we can trespass, take our chances.  A school, a company, a reason gives us rights: a class, a job, an invitation.  Just as easily withdrawn.  Someone gone is no more gone if living out of touch than dead. 

Stretching borders, moving space, sharing, fences once with gates now locked.  The constant change of perimeters even as we reach across the thousand miles of sea and mountain, desert, towns and farms, we find our inner sanctums closing in, doors shut, new doors open…for a while, as if on timers.  Locks and keys get rusty, passwords change.

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LITERATURE: Rabbit, Run – Show & Tell in Characterization

There is one risk the author runs in omniscient point of view and that is that the reader, knowing what the characters think can respond more accurately than merely providing their own justification or guesswork as to motivation.

By what Updike gives the reader as to Rabbit’s movements, his decisions, his reactions, one can choose to understand and either self-righteously blame Rabbit, denouncing him as a first class jackass or one can understand his frustration and sympathize, denouncing his actions rather than Rabbit’s character. But once we’re allowed inside Rabbit’s head–or any of the other characters, in particular, Janice or Ruth–those thoughts will enhance our vision and clarify motive. 

In other words, Rabbit is a real jerk.  He’s self-centered, immature, and while I can sympathize with his growing unrest and his weakness in seeking escape, I still think he needs a good slap on the side of the head.  He himself seems to recognize that everyone is bending over backward to help him out and overlook his myopic introspection.  Rabbit doesn’t learn.  His confrontation with Ruth and his treatment of her is forgotten immediately when he, that same night, runs off to be with his wife.  He’s "doing the right thing," even while making excuses that Janice is dumb and can’t have the baby without him there.  Within hours he’s proclaiming his love for Janice, and it’s not the sight of baby Rebecca that does it.

When the baby drowns, he’s more concerned with how others will treat him than about his wife, son, or dead child.  This is where, if Updike had shown Rabbit’s actions alone, we may have supported him in answering his responsibilities, regardless of his unsteady emotions. But as we follow his thought pattern, we see he does what’s best for him, even while blaming society for making him do what he needs to do.

This is character depiction at its best–and I suppose, its worst. We can understand Rabbit’s disgust with Janice’s drinking; but we get to see as well her reasons, her feelings and the insecurities and unhappiness that drives it.  We might have been okay with Rabbit’s treatment of Ruth had we seen only her tough, flippant exterior and the knowledge that she’s a whore.  Once we see her point of view, her fears and needs, her secrets, there is certainly more concern for her than what we might otherwise have had based on Harry’s or the narrator’s opinions only.

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REALITY?: Natural Humor

Maybe not completely natural, since I had a hand in molding nature and when man gets involved, we invariably mess the natural outcomes, but this was just too funny…

My little male hummingbird usually buzzes me, hits the feeder in the flowerbox by the kitchen window, then zips over to the snowball bush by the seed-feeder to keep an eye on intruders who may dare to visit the flowerbox.  I watched as he followed this routine, then realized the poor thing hovered in the bush where he usually goes but couldn’t settle on it–I’d cut off some of the branches, including "his" in my trimming this afternoon. 

I feel badly, but it had to be one of the funniest things I’ve seen–he hovered in the space for about 30 seconds in confusion until he must have realized I was laughing at him and he took off.

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