CLASS NOTES: 2/28/08

Some good workshopping last night; excellent group that covered just about every point of critique on each of the four stories.  This proves my theory about having a small but knowledgeable writing group as the optimum setup, and will consider this in the Thomaston grouping, though there’ll be much more than workshopping involved there.

All the supposedly close reading I’ve d0ne all these many years on a very consistent daily basis, yet I  rewrote a fellow student’s story so that a cracked head that’s bled out to the point of a panther licking the brain was a survivable injury.  Okay, so I’m not used to fantasy but this wasn’t a case of Wile E. Coyote and the Roadrunner.  Need to give it all the time and attention it deserves and will set aside quiet time to read instead of reading on the fly.

Good point made by the Professor: What are the consequences of the either/or decision made by the protagonist in the story?  Are they important enough to make the reader care what he/she does?

Back to work on hypertexting tonight. Might be able to use what I do on Hypertextopia to illustrate the medium serving double duty in a workshop submission, since it is easily accessible versus the closed circuitry of Storyspace.

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WRITiNG: Another New Puddle to Jump In

Discovered Hypertextopia and have already started writing a hypertext story online into it.  Actually, Yolanda and her bottle of beer from a couple posts down seemed perfect to play with the method and means.

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WRITING: Surround yourself with Silly Putty

Or anything silly, or just lift the restrictions that keep us tied to a pompous and pious reality.  Then will the stories, unshackled by learned inhibitions, become the fun uplifting narratives that come from eggplant dreams.

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LITERATURE: BASS 2007 – St. Lucy’s Home for Girls Raised by Wolves

I’ve not finished this story yet, but it is truly delightful and with no further explanation but the title (above) let me share this, a scenario in which Claudette, the narrator is paired with Mirabella, a younger girl to feed the ducks down at the pond to practice compassion:

It wasn’t fair.  They knew Mirabella couldn’t make bread balls yet.  She couldn’t even undo the twist tie of the bag.  She was sure to eat the birds; Mirabella didn’t even try to curb her desire to kill things–and then who would get blamed for the dark spots of duck blood on our Peter Pan collars?  Who would get penalized with negative Skill Points?  Exactly.  (p. 331)

The voice in particular is so consistently endearing in this story–I really wish I could say I’d written this one–by Karen Russell.  More in a bit.

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STORIES: Bottle of Beer

Down the road, out towards the west where sunsets simmered like a ball of butter melting into an oatmeal desert, a shadow of a man jogged closer and closer in little flicks of black.  Yolanda dropped her arm back into her widespread lap.  He was far away and it would be too long for her to block the sun without the weight of her arm becoming painful. Every few minutes she’d glance up from the basket of jalapenos in which her fingers fiddled and picked. She’d select one and stab it with a threaded needle, drawing it up into a clustered ristra that she’d hang out in the sun to dry.  She held her fat fingers in a salute above her eyes again and leaned forward in her seat. The black specter bobbled in the distance. He’d made about a yard of progress.  In Yolanda terms, he’d grown from just a speck to maybe eighth an inch in height.  Wind whistled out of her in a long low moan, and she resettled herself into the wicker rocking chair.  She reached over and picked up the bottle of beer that stood on the small table beside her, brought it to her mouth and sucked it dry. She rubbed at the wet rings left on the table with her hand, then wiped it on her neck.  The wetness felt good.  She rolled the still cool bottle against the tops of breasts that billowed above a tight cotton blouse.

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WRiTiNG: The Homeless Blogger

Wandering from one  server to another, lost between the hostels then setting up the sticks and buffalo hide to rest a season, maybe more.

Carolyn aka Chameleon, Serendipity, et al, has settled in (fer shure this time) at The Koala Kafe (I think). It’s been there for 24 hours so I’m linking to it now. Ah the flakey nature of the artiste!

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WRITING: Breaking Badly

There is a tendency these days to build upon success, what used to be known in the old days as riding someone else’s coattails, and we see this particularly in the area of television drama.  CSI worked in Vegas, so it’s set to play in Miami and New York. Law & Order breeds L&O SVU and Criminal Intent.  And the reality shows of course are breeding like rabbits.

So I figure that Fox’s Breaking Bad about a chemistry teacher who, upon learning he has terminal cancer, decides to supplement his current low paying salary and provide for his family by using his expertise in the field to have his own meth lab. 

Well, this show’s a goodie so we’ll have to imagine that the following variations are already in the works:

An English Professor discovers that he is facing early onset Alzheimers and plans to write a couple best selling novels before his eventual loss of memory and mental capacity; the humanities devotee could never stoop to selling academic papers which would pay well but not well enough.  He does well with his first and second novel, but just as he’s starting to hit his stride and get the big bucks, his short term memory loss becomes more insidious and without realizing it, he starts writing from long term memory, and produces outstanding work that unfortunately has already been written by Faulkner, Marquez and McCarthy.

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REALITY?: Living and Writing It

I realize that as I carry the plates back to the kitchen with one hand, I lick a finger of the other and round up and stick the poppyseeds off the plate and lick them off again.  My mother used to do this; thus my frugal nature perhaps, or just the game of it, I do not know.  But I can see her clearly  as a child imprints her mother in her mind, smiling, as if the greatest satisfaction of a roast beef sandwich on a roll were in these poppyseeds that have fallen off with every bite. This is an old, old memory, so much older than the one that barges in impudently hellbent on destruction of a life: a woman who is my mother only vacant and unyielding, eyes dead to the life around her, focused only on the tiny black specks of pepper in her soup and with poised spoon, she attempts to pick them out because she will not eat them. 

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LITERATURE: BASS 2007 – The Bris

This would likely qualify as horror story for many male readers, this story by Eileen Pollack–who seems to understand well the fear getting a circumcision as an adult would inspire.

We certainly have the wanting and how far someone would go to satisfy that want; though it is of the antagonist, an old man dying who put off the complete conversion to Judaism out of the natural fear of what a circumcision entails, who lived his life as a Jew and facing death, is finally willing to overcome his fear and have this done so he can be buried next to his wife in the conservative Jewish cemetery.  He tells his grown son his wishes and this is where some of the conflicts arise.  He is met, of course, with reluctance and failure to compassionately fulfill an old man’s wish. The son himself must face the fact that his father was not who he thought he was, and that this seemingly minor operation was something his father was not willing to do for his wife and family.  Or, it would seem, for himself as following the early death of his wife, he likely remained celibate rather than let another woman in on his secret.

A bit long, a bit too much ‘telling’ of story, and a bit less dramatic than such a plight might otherwise inspire, the concept of the story is still quite engrossing and with the additional deadline of imminent death, it’s still a bit more than the usual make-a-wish foundation type of quandry to resolve. 

Nicely done, though I would feel that once the problem is revealed, it might be a bit more hurried along in story, and while other characters introduced that spread this narrative out a bit added a little to the fullness of the story, the process may have also diluted the overall drama.

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WRITING: More on Influence

What’s also kind of neat–although I can’t write on demand yet–is that I can take a simple scenario from reality and turn it into something that grows from there.  Purist that I’ve been, I’ve always avoided taking anything from reality –and yes, I know, all fiction, even sci-fi and fantasy is seeded in reality–and in particular, my reality, and turned it into story.  I seem to be more flexible about that with the infusion of the short form of fiction that this course has introduced for study. 

It’s okay to knowingly take a bit of real and twist it into something else completely. 

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WRITING: Influences

Odd; I’ve been through this course before and I’ve read all the Flash Fiction anthologies and never without some type of constipated pain was able to easily write the short-short-short story.  I’m spitting them out lately though and they appear to have a beginning, middle, and an end, all within less than–well under 600 words, but that’s real good for me.

It would be nice if this influence does remain with me and is not just a time and place imprint.  After all, it took me years to get rid of the Poe-ness of my earlier writings. 

There’s always been a purpose for the quickie, it’s just a matter of perception and need, not quality.

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STORIES: Penance

Cursing at the snowplow going by at fifty miles per hour spewing up the icy compact boulders of snow gritted with sand they just put down  for traction fifteen minutes prior.  What makes these morons think the sand will do the most good on my lawn?    Immediately following him is another, a less intelligent fellow who hadn’t read the rules of taking care of town roads in the winter; his plow is lifted, he sprays down sand like diarrhea behind him  on the road. 

There is a hell, I know it; I believe!  Plowman #1 will spend eternity following Plowman #2 in a race around a track that’s set up like for Daytona.  Well, that’s what I might do at any rate.

Allen calls me from his nice warm office in the city.  He thinks it’s best if he stays there tonight; the city he means, because of the inclement weather.  Sure, I say, it’s dangerous to travel, the roads are bad. Always acquiescent, I promise him I’ll miss him but it’s so much safer that he not risk coming home, just as Plowmen #1 and #2 come flying by, this time in the opposite direction. 

Allen, well Allen will be locked for all eternity in a motel room with his twenty two year-old and only soda pop and oreos to eat forevermore.  That’ll fix his escargot-loving gastronomic instincts.  And never, ever will he ever see beef Bourginone again.  Yeah, that’s Allen’s hell, fer sure.

And me, well since I resist the urge to sprinkle broken glass out on the road, or for that matter, in Allen’s Veal Marsala dinners some quiet evening, I do believe I shall be properly rewarded.  Sit me down on the right hand side of God Himself.  Gold throne–with raspberry velvet cushions, plump and soft–and maybe Plowman #1 to bathe my feet in oil–when he’s on a break from Daytona–and on my lap, a silver plate of oh-so deep dark chocolate bon-bons, all for me and me alone.

The grating metal noise attracts me far from reaching my house yet, and when I look out I see that yes, the sparks are flying off the plow as metal grinds on clear clean stone and wonder, as I pop another Peanut M&M into my mouth, if those tiny flashes of flame aren’t quite enough to melt the snow all by themselves.

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WRITING: And its Consequences

Following the rules of story arc, the writing of a story goes through the same conflicts (loss of inspiration, technical glitches, losing the file) and builds to a climax and resolution.  The climax is: the story’s finished–or at least as finished as it’s ever going to be.  You’ve twiddled with it enough already; leave it alone and move on.  Which brings us to the resolution.

That means submission first of all.  And submission on the dark side is complete masochism and while I may have dabbled in that, I’m not a diehard fan.

Not in the mood today to rant about the submission process; it is what it is and them’s in control are the same them’s who make the rules and that’s all there is to it.  But a point must be made here: you can’t blame all your rejections on lack of MFA, agent connections, or the crappy direction fiction’s taking.  You have to face facts eventually and the fact is simply that no one wants to publish your work.  Fact #2: If it was really really good, someone will publish it.

Which brings me to the alternative ending of the self publishing route.  And here, I’ve been thinking about it again because of the hypertext nature of what I’ve been doing lately and for some reason I looked at it differently because of that nature of medium.  But you know what?  It still comes down to the same thing for me–if no one else thinks its good enough to publish, then most likely it really isn’t and why on earth do I want to embarrass myself and spend money to do so?

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WRITING: Perception

Developing a thicker skin is not necessarily the answer when accepting reality would be the more obvious and less painful thing to do.

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LITERATURE: BASS 2007 – Dimension

Alice Munro has been one of my favorite short story writers yet this story–while very compelling a topic–was not as brilliantly executed as what I’ve read of hers before.

The subject is of course very touchy; an older man seduces and marries a young girl, keeps her under his thumb and pregnant, his overbearing nature pushes her to the edge one day and she walks out in an argument only to return to find that he has killed their three children.

Munro has excelled at stories that delve into the many sides of human nature to discover and reveal what we exhibit as normal behavior and what influences and allows for variance, or deviance perhaps. What Munro is most interested seems to be the aftermath of violence.  What happens to Doree, the wife and mother, how is she going to handle the horror and will she be able to cope with life; and her husband, Lloyd…how will he justify to himself the murdering of his children? 

Munro finds the logical resolution as the two cling to each other, the only two people who could possibly understand what they’ve been through. 

While the writing is not really a standout, the story is compellling in its subject and its handling and presentation. 

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