LITERATURE: Ragtime – Diction

Little in Ragtime has caused me surprise or delight as far as imagery or eloquence, although I would say that Doctorow employs a staccato burst of information sometimes that sets an unmistakable tone of what he wishes to impart.  Often, the lack of adjectives aside from clear-cut relevance is a way of distancing the narrative voice from the drama, thus adding to it by contrast to the event.

But this, this phrase caught and held me:

It was a darkness as impudently close as his brow.  It choked him by its closeness.  And what was most terrifying was its treachery. He would wake up in the morning and see the sun coming in the window, and sit up in his bed and think it was gone, and then find it there after all, behind his ears or in his heart.  (p. 207)

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WRITING: Politics as a Learning Tool

I remember seeing Elvis Presley perform at the old Hartford Civic Center. He was a white-winged moth circling a stage so very far away.  Colored lights made it even more surreal. Each time I took hold of the binoculars from my sister for a turn, I found myself gaping instead at the audience standing closest to the stage. It was a fascinating revelation of perspective as they responded to him.

Once again, the presidential election is upon us and offers a wide variety of contestants. We see the full range of political innuendo and speeches that can be called inspirational by some, meaningless tripe by others. There is the tendency to view the hero and the adversary in different ways; one is a liar as the other comes clean. There is never such a stage set for hypocrisy not only for the candidates, but for the electors, and I find it more intriguing to focus on the latter to truly learn about perception and the difference in what is interpreted by the masses as individuals, or at the the very least, a sector of like-minded folk.

Thank God for the liberal and conservative views; thank Allah and Yahweh and the Big Bang itself for creating a world where people are different.  For diversity is not celebrated based on race and religion alone, but on individual opinion and a right to that opinion because we all see things with different eyes. What better chance to see the passion of the other view as reasonable; what better arena to realize the opposition holds a strong point too. Power is in numbers and majority rule; yet even a few still hold validity in their different values. What better time for a writer to observe and draw from that his characters.

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LITERATURE: Ragtime – History & Society

Doctorow slowly brings in historical characters as the story builds, and as I found with Harry Houdini and Evelyn Nesbitt, establishes their presence and then often brings them back around in some proximity to the lives of the fictional family that is the main story line.  What this does is has the reader looking for details to guess where the paths may cross.

There were a few chapters that focused on J. Pierpont Morgan, giving him background and character depth before we find his fascination with Henry Ford and the Egyptian artifacts as proof of reincarnation. It is interesting, and yet what I feel is the brief encounters with these historical figures doesn’t always get to a particular point that ties in with the main thread of story.

The last chapters returned us to the family home, and recalled a young black woman who the family has taken in after finding her nearly dead newborn in their garden where she tried to bury him.  Doctorow gets into quite a bit of detail about a black man who has tracked down the woman and who continues to visit the family on a weekly basis though the woman refuses to see him. Then he plays ragtime on the piano for the family, the woman agrees to see him, and the two end up married. Here’s where I got a bit frustrated as the woman’s character was never really developed and the whole scenario didn’t seem up to the amount of space given it.

I suppose that even though these two characters were not supposedly based on real people, I should keep them handy as they may pop up again.  The shorts like this do make me wonder…

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REALITY?: Discovery

Look what I found in the neighbor’s yard–purple apples! This tree never had any decent apples before so I never paid it any mind.  Let’s see how good a pie they’ll make.
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REALITY?: Crabapple Wine ’08

And so it begins:
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WRITING: Caterpillers, Midgets, and Green Candies

No longer politically correct, I know; this was something I mentioned once in a discussion in the advertising department back at EFI, an innovative learning systems company that made study tools and programs that were likely the forerunner of some of today’s software. 

The discussion was about things we hadn’t seen in a while, or things that were rare. Bob Rushworth was the artist/designer there and a guy who was wonderfully funny and sacrilegious. He said the trio made a great story title.  He was also a writer.

There’s a Waylon Jennings song that speaks of yoyos, bozos, bimbos and heros. Now there’s a crew to sing about.

How to we come up with groups, with catchy phrases that stay in our minds? Why did the trio that prompted this post recall another and another, and then float away from me?

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CURRENT AFFAIRS: McCain-Palin

I’m not one to applaud the nomination of a woman just on that fact alone, just as I wouldn’t have plans to vote based on gender or race–either against or for; though I must say I would’ve loudly applauded Condi Rice since she’s one smart and tough cookie, AND it would have fulfilled the societal need for a show of support for race and gender as a side bonus.  It wouldn’t fulfill gay rights’ needs, but we can’t have it all.

However, McCain’s choice of Palin appears to me to be a strictly politics-for-the-immediate need decision, that is, geared to winning the election.

Seriously, I question the lack of experience in government service here.  I didn’t take Senator McCain’s claim against Senator Obama on this point completely as a fact of life, though a consideration; but with Governor Palin’s paltry 2 years at the state level combined with her service as mayor to a small town, I can’t help but worry.  We’re picking a potential president here folks, and maybe this says it best:

 

And
Obama campaign spokesman Bill Burton warned that McCain had "put the
former mayor of a town of 9,000 with zero foreign policy experience a
heartbeat away from the presidency." (msnbc: http://www.msnbc.msn.com/id/26456114/)

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REALITY?: On Saving Things

And here’s the photo to prove it:

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On the top, an airlock that goes on the top of the wine carboys (glass jugs) that is filled with water, allows the gas to escape while keeping air out and away from the processing wine.  That little tube in the center sometimes gets dirty and I’ve tried twisting wet paper toweling down inside to clean it out but it’s not completely reliable.  On the bottom, a little brush that comes with hair-streaking kits that I don’t use because I use the other tool supplied.  But my father’s blood that courses my veins insists that I keep it for something someday.

That someday came; it fits and cleans it perfectly.

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REALITY?: The Time Between Seasons

082808rYes, when we bought this house 18 years ago I realized that this space under the counter was for a dishwasher, but the portables are more trouble than they’re worth and besides, it’s across the room from the sink so it doesn’t make much sense.

So it’s become the “winery” and it’s where the fermenting buckets, then the carboys filled with wine and left to settle before bottling are kept.

There’s usually wine in some form sitting there but for a day or two between last year’s harvest and this, it’s empty.

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The crabapples are picked and will be pickled and the grapes will be ready to pick in a week or so. Purple and crimson taken from the background of green.

And so the seasons go, from blossom to fruit to picking to squishing to bubbling to bottling the wine.

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REALITY?: Defruiting the Crabapple

There was a day when Chris and I would strip a tree clean in under half an hour. Reflective, now I pick alone; at least the lower branches where the ripe red fruit glows in the morning light like tasty rubies begging admiring sighs of one who lovingly will play with them in their final wash by man-made rain.  Suds will form like in a royal bubblebath to froth in angry fermentation.

The tree gives up the jewels it clutches in its many hands.  The fruit gives up its juices into wine.

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REALITY & WRITING: Time

I question man’s assessed value of time: labels of light as day and dark as night; leap year an accounting trick to spend away the leftover penny.

Light begins with the crowning of the sun between the widespread thighs of the horizon; Dark with the child’s disappointment with the earth and so to leave and find a better place to shine. 

Day is not a meteing out of minutes but a visual of the pleasure of the grace of stay.  Each daylight then becomes a different length of journey between the times of dark or that which you call night.  And so in winter if a man abides by what he sees, his toil is shortened by the natural span of warmth the sun does bring.  And when in summer he finds strength in its comfort, he will work and laugh and play and love a longer time. As all other living things of feather, fur, scale and leaf are still aware, there is no clock or calendar in earth and sky’s great planning. 

Who made man the sayer of nature, to twist it to his whim?

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LITERATURE: Ragtime – Character

Doctorow’s emphasis of story appears to be on inequities in society at the beginning of the twentieth century, and he does so subtly by following unrelated characters of different social status as their paths cross. In this manner, we become acquainted with the characters as they are affected by employment, travel, different factions fighting for civil rights, and each other.

The little boy of the first mentioned family is growing up, and we see an interesting side of him:

In fact he continued the practice not from vanity but because he discovered the mirror as a means of self-duplication.  He would gaze at himself until there were two selves facing one another, neither of which could claim to be the real one.  The sensation was of being disembodied.  He was no longer anything exact as a person. 

(…) He believed that statues were one way of transforming humans and in some cases horses.  Yet even statues did not remain the same but turned different colors or lost bits and pieces of themselves. 

It was evident to him that the world composed and recomposed itself constantly in an endless process of dissatisfaction.  (p. 135)

This is a fascinating development when set against the established stories of the magician, Harry Houdini, and the elusive Evelyn Nesbitt who so readily transforms herself to suit whatever situation she faces.

I also find it fascinating in raising the question of time and space as the boy goes about his consideration of the world around him:

But the boy’s eyes saw only the tracks made by the skaters, traces quickly erased of moments past, journey’s taken.

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REALITY?: Harvest Time

With the grapes purpling and the crabapples ready to be picked, it’s time to start degardening the vegies.  Here’s a photo of habaneros, jalapenos and Thai peppers.
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The habaneros were picked a little early but there’re quite a few of them so I needed to get some off the plants. Pulled out some of the tomato plants which fell victim to fusarium wilt and it looks like it’s salsa-making week ahead of me.  As well as pesto-making if I can find pignoli nuts at a reasonable price.  The basil was left in to remain fresh for pesto since I realized I still have a quart jar of dried basil from last year.  I pulled and prepared most of the dill for drying, leaving two clumps in place to set seeds. I do use my own seeds since if you buy a packet, you get barely enough to bother planting, though every five years or so I do splurge and buy new ones.

It’s that end-of-summer feeling again.

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LITERATURE: Ragtime – Stretching Reality

This may in fact be another example of narrator reliability, in the mix of fact and fiction:

The motor idled.  Only Jung noticed the little girl in the pinafore standing slightly behind the young woman and holding her hand.  The little girl peeked at Jung and the shaven-headed Jung, who was already disagreeing on certain crucial matters with his beloved mentor, looked through his thick steel-rimmed spectacles at the lovely child and experienced what he realized was a shock of recognition, although at the moment he could not have explained why. (p. 43)

Upon reading this, I am tempted to research the fact of Freud and Jung on this motor trip through New York to prove its accuracy.  Would I find what Doctorow has not given the read: any clue as to why Jung feels this "shock of recognition?"  If, in fact, he did; if in fact this trip to NY was made and if they passed a little girl in a pinafore at all.

See, things like this bother me.  I really must learn to relax and go with the flow. 

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LITERATURE: Ragtime – Social Comment

Doctorow gives us an America that is extremely class conscious, putting it subtly and yet powerfully in the images he draws:

One evening after the performance Houdini’s manager told him of being called by Mrs. Stuyvesant Fish of 78th Street, who wanted to book Houdini for a private party.  (. . .) Mrs. Fish was throwing a commemorative ball in honor of her friend the late Stanford White, the architect of her home.  He had designed her home in the style of a doge palace.  A doge was the chief magistrate in the republic of Genoa or Venice.  I won’t have nothing to do with those people, Houdini told his manager. (p. 35)

But when the price is doubled, Houdini agrees.  There is much truth in Doctorow’s assessment of the social strata of the era–and yet it is a deeper image of the nature of mankind.  Even as he displays the wealthy as frivolous and uncaring, just by this episode he shows that money is the driving force among the poor as well.  Does it matter what one does to make money? Is compromise different at one level than at another?

Capitalism has its evils, but without it, there would be little accomplishment in the industrial revolution of a country. It appears from this segment of story that there is benefit to all; those with a lot of money spend it, thus filtering it down to the rest of the population, just as capital venture creates employment.

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