LITERATURE: A Mess of Thoughts

As sometimes happens, what I’m currently thinking about or reading ties in peripherally with other topics that come up currently in the blogging community.

My pondering of McCarthy’s characters and plots and his different manner in handling them in No Country for Old Men has been bordering on his stepping out of form and into the more typical crime adventure story.  On Miss Snark’s weblog, there is a question of what constitutes literary fiction–as if that question can be easily answered–and it gets bogged down as a snobbish decision to compartmentalize and persecute the genre writers.  In a post titled "Miss Snark is not informed on this," a reader writes:

"I’ve noticed that the speculative fiction winning the big awards these days seem to be thinly disguised literary pieces.  I keep reading stories about silent characters who softly reflect on their lives as they sip tea. At some point, something mildly otherworldly happens to qualify the story as sf or fantasy. Then it ends. But the stories I love to read (and write) have Action! Suspense! Adventure! They’re heaped in either technology or magic but anchored with realistic and complex characters. Not pulp by any means, but far more exciting than "literary" work.

Please tell me, O High Priestess of Words, what is the state of today’s speculative fiction? Will high action win out in the end? Or must I learn to write riveting prose about contemplating the wild stalks growing on the edge of a rippling lake if I’m ever to be published?"

In the comments, the only reference to an attempt at definition of "literary fiction" points to a spoof (though just now I added my own link).  The snobbishness of some to classify fiction as literary seems to justifiably irritate the genre writers and readers enough to raise some hackles without really understanding that it’s not so much genre related (nor carries as a requirement any self-contemplation of rippling lakes while sipping tea) as how the novel is handled and told; genre is often secondary to the elements of story.  H.G. Wells writes sci fi; but he’s definitely lit fic too.

Meanwhile, here I am reading one of my favorite authors, Cormac McCarthy, and wondering how he seems to have wandered from his style.  I doubt that No Country for Old Men will ever be deemed literary fiction; whereas there is no doubt that Blood Meridian and Suttree, as well as the Border Trilogy, have easily established themselves as such. 

For me, what I consider as literary is something that is more open to interpretation, has the Barthes writerly vs. readerly aspect to it, includes more setting and characterization perhaps, is loaded with metaphor and layering–not number of plots-layering, but layers of depth in meaning.  I’m very into lit fic, and yet horror and true crime have always held a special place in my heart. People will read what they like to read and regardless of what that is, there’s no reason whatsover to feel bad and on the defensive–nor particularly snobbish–about it.

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NEW MEDIA: Fun with Photoshop

Since I don’t have animation experience yet, I’m going the old-fashioned route with a modern twist: Photos varied slightly in color and magnification to be sequentially arranged and given one-second slots in the timeline; much as the old flipping of pages to show action.  Haven’t actually put them into the movie timeline yet to see how they work but something interesting should come of it.  I’m going to play with the different transition tools between frames or maybe just quick-flip through them without the slowing down of fades, etc.

The problem with exploring a new medium or software program is the tendency to try out and use all the varying effects available.  The trying out is good; it’s the using that makes for a very amateurish end result when simplicity or at the least, consistency would have been more appropriate.

The fun is in the discovery and learning.  The fun is also in producing something that amazes with the newness and becomes a starting point to laugh at when experience later serves to make it look positively hokey.  After all, our first uttered "ma-ma" or "da-da" will never be equaled in audience response regardless of all the fine effort we put into our learned speechs throughout our lifetime.

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WRITING: Submission Responses

Well no, they haven’t read the stories yet, but they did respond…with a submissions request of their own to subscribe to their lit journal.

I suppose that it’s only good business sense (although they didn’t bother to look up whether I already am a subscriber or not) to solicit off names of submitters, and it is better I would think to get this request before rather than after a rejection, but it does tickle the consciousness with suspicion.  Are they going to wait to read until I send them my acquiesence and a check?  Should I have included a subscription renewal form with my submission?  Is this why there is a four-month response period because submissions go through the subscription department first?

My volley?  I’m going to let each story stand on its own.  But I vow that if I am accepted for publication, I will indeed subscribe–and insist my friends all subscribe–to that "winning" publication.  Unless, of course, their payment consists of a paid subscription.

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NEW MEDIA: Microphoning

So I get online and Google "Wizard of Oz lyrics."  Copy a few down.  Then proceed to sing "The Wicked Witch is Dead"  and "Follow the Yellow Brick Road" into my computer and listen.

Yep.  I’m a Munchkin.

Then I try recording again one of my poems about reincarnation.  It’s laughable.  I add Echo effect and that helps a teeny bit.  I record and re-record and use my bestest, deepest, big person voice I can find (actually, when I say Munchkin, I don’t mean that I have one of those sweet, little-girl voices, I mean Oz Munchkin) and do a run-through without a hitch.  Then I listen and while I sound a little better, the deep breather in the background does too.

I forgot the drip coffepot was on.

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LITERATURE: No Country for Old Men – Plot Points

While I shouldn’t complain that McCarthy has decided to use plotting in its simplest form, I’ve got to say that the story the plots lead us through doesn’t quite sit right with me.

Of course I’m used to McCarthy enough now to not depend upon his characters to do the obvious, but I do wonder why Llewelyn would a) direct his wife to go to Odessa to stay with her mother, realizing who he’s up against–just doesn’t seem a safe place for her to hide out; b) call Wells for help (and end up talking to Chigurh, who has just killed Wells) even though the guy seemed nice and wanted to help him, he’s still one of the bad guys; and c) wander out of the hospital without clothes or shoes and try to get across the border that way in a cab.

Once McCarthy has decided to go the "normal" route of mystery adventure, his characters shouldn’t be doing dumb things. 

That’s for the hour-long TV shows, where it can possibly slide right by the viewing audience.

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LITERATURE: And Carpentry

111706l Well, the decision was to go cheapo just to get the books off the floor for now.  I just don’t know if we’re going to add that room on and if we do, everything will be switched around and changed, bookshelves being built ins most likely in the new room. By the way, that’s part of the pile on the left, standing in line waiting to hop aboard. Eventually, these shelves can be used in the basement or the garage.

However, I’m not totally without class.  For $50 more, I’m putting on some frame moulding that matches it perfectly and gives it a finished look.  111706l2It will actually be the one on the extreme left, because it has a nice simple clean line.  I just ordered fifty feet of it and am sure I can use the balance in the shop, but this way I can cut it to fit the front face exactly, running along the sides and top.

Which leaves me with sorting the books and putting them on the shelves tonight.  I was going to separate the ones I’ve read from the ones I haven’t read (after the major groups of fiction, non-fiction by topic), but now I’m thinking of putting all the novels together, both read and unread, in alphabetical order by author, but with a tiny little silver dot on the books that have been read.

Now this is a biggie for me–to graffiti-ize a book.  I, who will not even put my name in a book and cringe at some of the desecration I’m finding in those library sale books (a folded page! an underlined phrase!).  And on the linen-backed hardcovers, a transparent tape with a silver dot will be the most I can make myself do.

This is my fun project for tonight.

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NEW MEDIA: Flash Animation Tutorial

CORRECTION:  The software that is referenced here is actually a free download called Blender, and while it may work similar to Macromedia Flash, it’s a totally different product.  This is what happens when your brain is on stress.  I apologize for the confusion and thank GLH for the clarification.

How exciting–right when I’m getting all hepped up again in making my dopey little poem into a movie, Jerz’s Literacy Log posts a tutorial on animation on Macromedia Flash. 

How will I parcel out my time now between Flash animation, McCarthy, Barthes, IF, Hypertext 3.0, video story, movie-making, fiction writing, and dinner?

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LITERATURE: No Country for Old Men – Sparse Language

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Does this look like Cormac McCarthy to you?  Forgive the fuzzy photo; I couldn’t click fast enough because the pages wouldn’t stay open.

But the short sentences?  The loads of white space?  True, this is dialogue and Southwestern talk at that (this is a compliment, folks), and the punctuation in typical McCarthy style is missing, but I’m so used to pages where the text covers the page in flowing descriptive narrative that establishes mood.  Here, he establishes mood, reveals character, progresses plot and gives just a tad of backstory in dialogue.

It’s brilliantly done and yet, why do I feel cheated?

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LITERATURE: No Country for Old Men – Transitioning

Yes, I learned that term in new media I’m sure, and have come up against it again in movie-making.  It’s interesting how once you catch the meaning of a term, you begin to notice it all over the place–but in a McCarthy book?

Why I’m doubtful is that McCarthy usually has several characters moving through the book from the beginning, and No Country is no exception.  But he has just introduced two new characters, halfway through the story, that we kind of knew existed, but knew nothing about them at all:  the drug dealers and the paid-killers who love ’em.   

The office was on the seventeenth floor with a view over the skyline of Houston and the open lowlands to the ship channel and the bayou beyond.  Colonies of silver tanks.  Gas flares, pale in the day.  When Wells showed up the man told him to come in and told him to shut the door.  He didn’t even turn around.  He could see Wells in the glass.  Wells shut the door and stood with his hands crossed before him at the wrist.  The way a funeral director might stand.  (p. 139)

This doesn’t come as a separate section, it simply follows a shootout between the dope dealer Chigurh and our young man on the run, Moss.  Notice the way McCarthy brings in this "meanwhile, back at the ranch" via the setting.  An office building in the city sounds worlds away from the backroads through lava ridges and cattlegates that we’ve been through with Moss and Sheriff Bell.  So we move through setting first, and meet a different set of characters as well.  These folks don’t talk the same either.  They’re smooth, they’re formal, they’re the big guys.

McCarthy also manages to inject some humor here, when Wells, obviously a hit man, asks the man who is paying him, "I wondered if I could get my parking ticket validated."

Again here, there is much told in conversation that is quite different than McCarthy’s usual minimal dialogue from the loner-type characters of his other novels.  And, it intricately progresses the story without feeling like it’s infodump. 

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WRITING & REALITY?: Drama

New plot twist in the ongoing two and a half year battle that’s been a large part of my life.  Amazing how, had I sat to write this novel, I never could have come up with what reality can produce.  Intrigue, lies, cheating, a cast of characters that this writer just couldn’t dream up.

Use it, you say?  There’s no way I can tell this story–besides, I cannot get into the heads of the other characters so it would be very one-dimensional.  But will these actors, actions show up in my writing some how, some way.

It’s inevitable.

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WRITING: One Hand Washes the Other

Quite a while ago I took classes that involved the reading and writing of poetry.  I’d written a few dumb poems in my time, but the study of poetry taught me things about imagery, compression, and emotion that I’d never really picked out before.  I’ve since written (and published!) a couple pieces, but haven’t for a while now. 

One of the things I am grateful for in learning poetry is its elements, noted above, that subconsciously filtered through to my short story writing.  I look now at what I’d written way back when and the evidence clearly shows poetry’s impact.

In trying to put together a project to learn audio visual mediums for storytelling, I went through my poetry files to pick out something that would be easy enough to work with, meaning in using images, movement, etc.  In selecting a piece, I’m finding that the editorial tiger in me rises to the forefront and I’m making changes as I go.  Actually, before I even start to think of it in audio and visual terms, I’m looking at the language, and more importantly, the story of it. 

So art moves in a circular motion.  Life begets life.  Experience gained from writing short stories is starting to guide the revisions in my poetry.  I’m learning that it’s not always enough to grasp a feeling or hide a meaning within words; no matter how short or unresolved, even poetry can have a story.

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REALITY, et al: No Time Left for…

…middle-of-the-road tasks right now, though I’m working hard to get caught up and not fall too far behind on my dusting.

Finished a project on A Clockwork Orange comparing the film and the book to illustrate the advantages/disadvantages of the mediums.  The best part of taking on a project is exploring the possibile methods of presentation.  I ended up going with Word for viewing selected text with Sound Recorder embedded, and of course, the DVD through Media Player.  It was a fun thing to do and I hope there will be a good showing at the next Narratives meeting where I hope to show it.

Also started working on  a short film as a way of enhancing one of my poems with audio and visual effects.  This came about when I discovered Windows Movie Maker in my search to find suitable programming for the ACO project.  Did a real quickie to check it out, and since it was so very easy to use, want to play with it a bit more before I tackle Macromedia Flash 8, since what’s stopped me on that is self-teaching the complicated interface (or it’s complicated to my brain right now, anyway). 

I’ve pulled some images off the web for this, but since I don’t intend to use anything but original work, they are just for ideas.  So….

This morning I drove around the Adams’ parking lot looking for misplaced shopping carts and got some terrific photos, despite a brief battery failure on the camera–which I fixed by taking them out, licking the contact points, moving them around in place, whispering a prayer, and adding any black magic I could think of to make them come back to life for the few photos more that I needed.  One of the employees was out back on a cigarette break, and to her credit, she finally questioned my purpose: "Are you from the dumpster company or something?"  I assured her I was not there for any reason other than my art, but complimented her on company loyalty. 

So that’s where I’ve been the last few days. 

P.S.  Sumbitch.  Just noticed a microphone button on my camera.

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LITERATURE, WRITING, NEW MEDIA, ETC.: Having Fun

I’m diligently working away on the Clockwork Orange project, having discovered the method of seeking bits of film and marking them for showing, and using Word for the text portion, embellished by a Munchkin audio file.

Also made a movie!  Short, dumb, but combining a couple images with text, having discovered Windows Movie Maker while scouting out a system for working on the Clockwork Orange project.  While it won’t work for my purposes on that, I’ve already selected one of my poems, Recycling, and am collecting some images and a certain munchkin as reader.  It’ll be more or less a Flash 8 for Dummies learning step that will at least get me started in the direction of new media which I’m planning for a grouping of my related stories in Flash, having already set them up for hyperfiction in the last issue of otto.

A large doe walks through the backyard, oblivious to the damp drizzle of the day.  A bright ball of red on the bare birch tree turns out to be a cardinal staring me down over the empty feeder.

Odd it seems (love the accusation of being syntactically incorrect, now I even make an effort to be so) that in scanning my poems looking for one maleable to the new media format, I read and wonder to myself, just what the hell did I mean?

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LITERATURE: No Country for Old Men – UnMcCarthylike Structure

Not particularly taken with this novel, though the story works since it’s not all that strange.  A young man, Llewelyn Moss,  comes upon a drug deal gone bad, dead dealers and deader cars, but a stash of heroin and two million bucks.  He takes the money and obviously needs to run from pissed-off dealers and the law.  Interwoven is a story of the lawman who tries to find him, Sheriff Bell, and one bad dude named Chigurh. 

So far, very typical of McCarthy’s stories: three men wandering half the book towards each other without realizing it.  That’s conflict, and it’s building because they’re bound to meet up.

What’s very unMcCarthy is the short sentence structure, the depth he brings to his characters without holding back about whether they’re good guys or bad guys.  How long did it take me to see Blood Meridian’s Judge as evil?  My opinion of Suttree kept threatening to change. Even in the Orchard Keeper I reserved full judgement until I’d stood by and watched a few too many folks get killed.  There’s a lot of dialogue in this novel as well, and it’s directly progressing the story, and it’s short sentence-structure–very realistic I would say.

One more thing that’s different.  It’s accessible.  Unless McCarthy has buried meaning so deep below the surface that I just can’t find it, I don’t really see too much beyond a good story right now.  An adventure story, with good characters, and a good plot. 

But where’s the beef?

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LITERATURE & NEW MEDIA: – A Clockwork Orange – Having Fun

Somewhere between the last few pages of the novel and the desire to see the movie I was struck with the brilliant idea of putting together a presentation of sorts for our writers group to illustrate the changes story can take under the influence of different mediums. 

So I got me a mic, and I’m fiddling in Word to record portions of scenes that correlate to the movie where this impact is particularly vivid.  I’ve typed up a passage in Word, added a recording of my reading of the passage, and recorded it over and over again, trying to lose the munchkinesque quality of my voice tone on any recording medium, but it’s not working well.

Imagine, if you can, a Munchkin straight out of Oz, high on funny flowers reading Alex’s bliss as he masturbates and listens to a violin concerto with the Macon, Georgia Philharmonic as background.

Maybe this wasn’t such a hot idea.

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