LITERATURE: Love in the Time of Cholera – Relationships

Another thing I find in Marquez is an ability to put the human element into a very relative form amid the routine lives of his characters, so that we understand their behavior in more traumatic events.  I love this segment about Dr. Urbino and his wife, Fermina Daza in the early years of their marriage, which reveals a bit of gameplaying that endures in their relationship in condensed form in their early morning rising: he early, noisy; she later, pretending sleep.  But it displays one of those turning points in a marriage where control and compromise is established:

The truth was they both played a game, mythical and perverse, but for all that, comforting; it was one of the many dangerouse pleasures of domestic love.  But one of those trivial games almost ended the first thirty years of their life together, because one day there was no soap in the bathroom.  (p. 17)

Marquez has injected a bit of humor here, and yet truth, as the biggest annoyances are usually over the smallest but most persistent aggravations.  Dr. Urbino has risen and bathed in the dark of early morning, while Fermina is in her half-awake state in bed:

After a prolonged sound of starched linen in the darkness, Dr.  Urbino said to himself:  "I’ve been bathing for almost a week without any soap."

Then, fully awake, she remembered, and tossed and turned in fury with the world because in fact she had forgotten to replace the soap in the bathroom.  She had noticed its absence three days earlier when she was already under the shower, and had planned to replace it afterward, but then she forgot until the next day, and on the third day the same thing happened again.  The truth was that a week had not gone by, as he said to make her feel more guilty, but three unpardonable days, and her anger at being found out in a mistake maddened her.  As always, she defended herself by attacking.

"Well I’ve bathed every day," she shouted, beside herself with rage, "and there’s always been soap."

Sound familiar?  People, often fed up with other things that have accumulated over time, decide to take a stand and sadly, it’s often when they’re on the shakiest ground.

So Dr. Urbino and his wife carry this argument around for a while, allowing it to disturb their life much more that it should be allowed to do.  Dr. Urbino, who for four months has been sleeping in the study, falls asleep one night on their bed while reading.  Fermina attempts to wake him so that he will leave, but Dr. Urbino is only half awake and finds himself very comfortable in their bed.

"Let me stay here," he said.  "There was soap."

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LITERATURE: Love in the Time of Cholera – Character

Gabriel Garcia Marquez just has a way with making the mundane exciting.  His characters are carefully drawn out–I can imagine him sitting there thinking about them until he has someone whom he knows the reader will want to think about.  Not understand, mind you, but definitely think about. 

I’m about seventy pages into the book, past the first chapter and into some backstory but I couldn’t stop reading long enough to sit and review it.  But this, the description of the main character of the first chapter, Dr. Juvenal Urbino is an example of the care that is taken:

His eightieth birthday had been celebrated the year before with an official three-day jubilee, and in his thank-you speech he had once again resisted the temptation to retire.  He had said:  "I’ll have plenty of time to rest when I die, but this eventuality is not yet part of my plans."  Although he heard less and less with his right ear, and leaned on a silver-handled cane to conceal his faltering steps, he continued to wear a linen suit, with a gold watch chain across his vest, as smartly as he had in his younger years.  His Pasteur beard, the color of mother-of-pearl, and his hair, the same color, carefully combed back with a neat part in the middle, were faithful expressions of his character.  (p. 5)

Now knowing that the suit is white (and dressed in white linen with a vest and a soft hat and cordovan boots – p.9), I imagine him looking somewhat like the Colonel of Kentucky Fried Chicken.  But there is that air of old-time elegance and class.  There is a meticulousness about him that tells by his dress that would extend beyond and into an integral part of his personality. 

But what is Marquez saying about Dr. Urbino in marking his appearance as "faithful expressions of his character?"  Marquez certainly wants us to go back and reread this short passage to come to understand the man.  In 100 Years of Solitude, Marquez did not give us such physical descriptions and yet we came to picture the characters, mainly by their behavior and their eccentricities.  I believe that he is doing the same here, but in the reverse.  Imagine, and therefore, know.

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WRITING: Publishing Credentials

Well, if I hadn’t wandered around a bit at Daniel Green’s Reading Experience this morning I might never have realized that first, he has a great short story published there that has been included in the Third Anniversary Issue of Bewildering Stories and second, that my own poem published in issue no. 87 had been included in the Second Anniversary Issue.

Bewildering Stories is an online magazine that always includes some excellent fiction, essays, reviews and poetry.  They are also real nice folks and this has spurred me on to submit a couple of poems to them that were just too personal when I wrote them (and if I can read them now without choking up I suppose they’re ready to offer to share).  One of my short stories is more geared towards the type of thing they publish and if I can polish it a bit, I may send that out for submission as well.

Then sit and cross my fingers and tell myself I did the best I could.

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NEW MEDIA: Hypertext 3.0 – Reader Choice?

Been doing some thinking on hypertext and the notion of reader choice of paths and the non-linearity of the medium.

While the idea is that both writer and reader are authors by nature of writing the story in a series of clicks on the hyperlinks and thus changing the sequence and dissolving the idea of linearity, there are two different philosophies at work here–or several.

The writer must write all the stories in a fashion that doesn’t leave the reader at a dead end or jumping off a cliff.  Hence, the writer still has a large measure of control over the reader–not which way he’ll go to get to the end, but where he does eventually end up.  He must take into consideration what needs to be known (in a story atmosphere) as he goes along so that the story itself isn’t missed or nonsensical. 

For the reader, on the one hand he has all this terrific freedom to fly along on the interstate or take the scenic route–and that will depend upon the personality or reading habits of the reader.  But beyond that, does the reader really choose a path–or in fact, is he guessing?  With fiction hypertext, it’s almost a "what’s behind door number 3" deal, with at the most, a word or phrase that may subtly hint at something that arouses the reader’s curiosity.  It may even be the fact alone of it being a link and offering a new direction. In Afternoon, A Story, a hyperfiction by Michael Joyce, for example, the reader really doesn’t have a clue where clicking a word will take him except off that page.  He has produced a different storyline that is unique to him and to this particular reading (the chance of repeating the exact same sequence in a story with 600 plus links without benefit of mapping is slim).  But there is not a choice made as to where he is sending the protagonist; only that it is elsewhere.

And what about those, like me, who are directionally dysfunctional? 

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REALITY?: Happy Father’s Day

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BLOGGING & REALITY?: Circumstantial Evidence

In the next few weeks, reality will be heavily voiced over in metaphor and symbolism–as has usually been my way unless the situation cannot be covered in poetic form. 

I’ve applied for a couple jobs that may call for checking out the weblog as writing was appropriate to the positions.  A cursory glance at best–and never on a Saturday–so the top few latest postings will always be me at my best.  Or attempting it at least.  No one shall plunge the depths of metaphor to discover me hiding within.  Poetry, which is my inmost shell, I’m sure will not be noticed much less comprehended.  And so they’ll never know who I really am.

So bear with me for a while, forgive my prattlings on literary topics of discussion and don’t try to ponder the more musical notes of reality for now.

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NEW MEDIA: Afternoon, A Story – Narrative Structure and Voice

I have decided to read through this hypertext novel by first exploring the main trail.  It is told in first person pov, the protagonist being a separated husband wondering about an accident that may have involved his wife and son. 

The story opens as the man is having lunch with his friend (business partner?) and afterwards he calls the school where his son should be in attendance and realizes that no one has seen him.  Then he calls his wife’s office and again, she is not there and he must speak with her co-worker/lover.

I imagine his squinting as he tries to position the phone, squinting likewise trying to moor himself between her wonderfully muscular thighs while she sighs like water.

The prose is poetic and yet I imagine the words spoken in a deep and saddened tone because the character has already marked me with his mood.  Unlike many game stories which move forward with action, or interactive fiction which is somewhat emotionless, this form of new media sings of writing and character. 

I would liken it to that of visionary poetry. The author is Michael Joyce.

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REALITY?: Anniversary Lobster

Plates set out for the dinner meal, fork and knife and claw crackers and picks.  And several napkins and individual butter bowls.  Wineglasses filled with sparkling white–to be proper, of course.  No bibs; we change our shirts instead. 

Eight pounds of lobster, one slightly less than four, one slightly more, together bright red in a bowl at center table.  I pull off a leg and claw from "Tiny" and start right in.  He takes the other off–a thoughtful gesture and I know it.  "The claw’s as big as my hand," I say.   He says, "Remember the one on our honeymoon; the claw was as big as mine."  We laugh, remembering the single eight-pound pet upon our plate. 

Lobster and melted butter, nothing else.  The wine alone to help it down and maybe keeping it afloat inside.  "Remember Raine," he says.  I nod and smile.  It has become our name for Maine since every year we went for seven years and every year the sky was grey and wet.

I take the smaller lobster body, expert at breaking it in half and flipping out the meat.  The legs I’ll suck on later.  "You haven’t used your fork," he says.  I simply lick the butter from my fingers.  It is a feast enjoyed best in the basest way.  "You’ve left me the bigger one," he says.  "I must still love you then," I say.   Last night; our sixteenth anniversary.

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REALITY?: Evolution and the Layers of Night

Why has not the lightning bug learned to fly above the reach of children who run in glee with jars and open palms across the blackened lawns?

Then I see the flitting bats above, winging tighter, tighter concentric circles in the sky.

To each small creature, his own layer of the night.

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INTERACTIVE FICITON: Book and Volume – Slow Reader

I’ve lost my hard-learned knack of getting through  IF.  To give you an example, the transcript from I’ve made of my progress in getting outside from "my" apartment to the street to begin my mission (the text reponses/directions following the > are mine:

Session restored.

>go south
That’s not going to happen while you remain on the couch.

>stand up
You get off the couch.

>x
( That is, "examine the couch." )

It doesn’t go with art, which isn’t a problem at the moment.

>x room

Home
It’s your residential canister. Your lime-green couch is against the longest wall. And it looks like we also have your nLap 500 and a heap of clothes.

>find Wendy
If such a discovery can be made, it will have to be made manually.

>go out
You switch the light off as you leave. The door swings shut after you.

Hallway
The palate-cleansing corridor that leads to your apartment.

>go outside
You can’t go that way.

>go down hallway
Only the first part of that was understandable: go down.

>go down

Your Apartment Building’s Lobby
Clean, if not homey. The doorman waits in a Plexiglas cube that looks curiously bulletproof.

>speak to doorman
That command wasn’t understood.

>ask doorman
( That is, "ask the doorman for the Plexiglas cube." )

Your attempt to talk to the doorman either doesn’t make it through the Plexiglas or doesn’t make it into his head.

>say hello
( That is, "say that to the doorman." )

The doorman acknowledges your greeting appropriately.

>walk past doorman
Something that you’re trying to refer to either hasn’t ever been mentioned or is not currently in the area.

>walk past cub
Something that you’re trying to refer to either hasn’t ever been mentioned or is not currently in the area.

>walk past cube
Something that you’re trying to refer to either hasn’t ever been mentioned or is not currently in the area.

>go to cube
That’s not something you can enter.

>exit lobby
But you aren’t in the surroundings.

>go to Plexiglas cube
That’s not something you can enter.

>leave lobby
But you aren’t in the surroundings.

>go north
You can’t go that way.

>go south
You can’t go that way.

>go east
You can’t go that way.

>go west
You can’t go that way.

>leave building
But you aren’t in the surroundings.

>step up to doorman
That verb doesn’t seem to be part of your API, metaphorically speaking. That is, that verb won’t be understood. Try something else, or phrase that command differently.

>walk to doorman
That’s not something you can enter.

>walk out
Onward, into the intentional city. nWare crafted it well — built from the ground up with security and scalability in mind, it’s fully pedestrianized but hums, almost full-size, like a city center.

The night sky is completely cloudless. The dry warmth of the air hints at the desert that surrounds nTopia.

Abalone & Fifth
Your apartment building is on the southwest corner. Opposite it is a windowless, blocky building. On the southeast corner Pharmicopia sprawls. Otto’s Automat is to the northwest.

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LITERATURE: Love in the Time of Cholera

Though I didn’t mention it, my amazon.com order came in yesterday and I’ve already added and moved around things on my reading list (lower right sidebar) to reflect the changes.  It’s tough to stay away from them and I did some peeking, but Marquez was ordered specifically to read along with a buddy; Mark of Clearwater Reflections is going to read it as well now.  We’ll be starting in a couple of days so look for some good literary argument.  You’re all invited to join on in!

This should be fun!

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WRITING: Genre Switch

Someone told me the other night that I should write a story in a genre rather than mainstream literary.  I’m considering it.

I’ve always liked Hopalong Cassidy, though Cisco Kid was probably my fav; but I’ve also always wanted to be an Indian, and not a squaw–a brave.

Then again, my first writings back in high school were all of the horror genre.  Loved the Alfred Hitchcock and Twilight Zone type of scary.  Oddly enough, the novel I wrote six years ago was romance–something I never read and was horrified recently to find two Danielle Steel paperbacks in among my books.  One was from my father-in-law who thought I’d like it, and the other I bought after I wrote the novel and while waiting for rejection slips, picked up a DS just to see what made her so successful.  I never found out.

So maybe something new is in the works just to stretch the mind.

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NEW MEDIA: Afternoon, A Story – Zig-zagging

In reopening this hyperfiction novel by Michael Joyce, nothing much beyond the first few "pages" looks familiar–as well it wouldn’t!

Unless you track your progress through hyperfiction and save your place, and I have just set up a small notebook for this and for the Interactive fiction I’m also reading, every read will be different.  The story will change dramatically in narrative structure through the choice of sequence taken and thus the meaning and the reader reaction will be different.  You will find yourself returning to certain points either by backing up and taking a new path, or by the written-in loops intended by the author to bring you back to a place where the story can again flow without loss of information.

It is such a different process in reading from the linearity of a physical book.  While the initial learning of method may at first reduce total enjoyment, the overall freedom eventually should overwhelm the reader with its possibilities and sense of involvement.

Ah, the power!

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LITERATURE: Ploughshares – Poetry

In truth, I’m more impressed with the poetry in this issue (Vol. 30, No. 4) than in the short stories.  I am certainly no expert at either writing or critiqueing poetry, but words and form such as this delight me:

Still, for a while the rain seemed
nothing.  We lashed ourselves
to ourselves.  We were a line. Un-
crossable.  The line of us could walk
and weep and believe we were of use.

(Up the Steps of the Capitol, Nance Van Winckel)

Simple, good imagery, powerful picture of hope and human caring.

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WRITING: And its related implications

Somewhat concerned this morning after a discussion last evening with a friend regarding a former project where I’d served as editor.  A bit of a turnaround in his viewpoint, or perhaps just a bit more honesty being offered, but it does open the way to deeper consideration of intent and motive.

Just as a writer cannot avoid the fact that writing and being published is not a totally altruistic act but rather to some degree ego related, producing a project provides the same physical evidence of inspiration that may directly involve self-pride and accomplishment that overshadows purpose.  Especially so when blinded to the actual value of the product.

Something to think about; what was the true motivation–was there something over and above vanity press?  And, was it going nowhere anyway?

How embarrassing…

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